Black

Submitted
November 7, 2003
Updated
November 7, 2003
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 4
Size: 0k
Words: 96
Comments: 13
Views: 872
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Rating: 0

What do you think of when u hear the word black? Please tell comment and tell me and i will add on. i hope for this poem to b quite long.

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Black
Submitted: November 7, 2003 • Updated: November 7, 2003
Word count: 45 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 146

Chapter 2 - White
Submitted: November 7, 2003 • Updated: November 7, 2003
Word count: 18 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 136

Chapter 3 - Red
Submitted: November 7, 2003 • Updated: November 7, 2003
Word count: 14 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 122

Chapter 4 - Green
Submitted: November 7, 2003 • Updated: November 7, 2003
Word count: 19 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 123

Comments

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FireTempest666 on October 13, 2004, 10:00:09 AM

FireTempest666 on October 13, 2004, 10:00:09 AM (Chapter: 4)

you should tell me when more come out love

Dragon_Lord on June 21, 2004, 7:18:50 AM

Dragon_Lord on June 21, 2004, 7:18:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

Oblivian, monster, whispering, hate, rage, fear, lonelyness, alone. there u go i gave u some more.

Raymei on May 19, 2004, 4:15:11 PM

Raymei on May 19, 2004, 4:15:11 PM (Chapter: 1)

Things that come to mind that aren't on the list are:
sleek
sleep
breathless
secret
gone
melancholic
fate
blind

um...that's all for now n.n

mudlake126 on May 19, 2004, 1:41:43 PM

mudlake126 on May 19, 2004, 1:41:43 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow, i like it. maybe accepting, devouring?

tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 2:37:46 PM

tiler_james on January 11, 2004, 2:37:46 PM (Chapter: 1)

i like it. ^-^

Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:59:52 AM

Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:59:52 AM (Chapter: 1)

chios
mean
bad
weird
physico
murder
sadness
thick
cant see
confused

Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:58:01 AM

Weirdopunkwolf on November 27, 2003, 6:58:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

bitter
alone
sadness
gothic
freak

baby-kitty on November 8, 2003, 6:22:32 PM

baby-kitty on November 8, 2003, 6:22:32 PM (Chapter: 4)

i am

RiRiana on November 8, 2003, 3:59:03 PM

RiRiana on November 8, 2003, 3:59:03 PM (Chapter: 4)

These are good. You should write more.

RiRiana on November 8, 2003, 3:58:20 PM

RiRiana on November 8, 2003, 3:58:20 PM (Chapter: 3)

YAY! I like it!

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