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The Begining to Another Crisis (midgar Reborn)

Cloud and Rufus Disapper, but a unexspeted guest makes a very special apperence that no one realizes. Will they find out and stop his madness from takeing over or will it be too late.......

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Gathering
Submitted: March 19, 2007 • Updated: March 19, 2007
Word count: 922 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 565

Chapter 2 - Finding a Man
Submitted: March 21, 2007 • Updated: March 21, 2007
Word count: 659 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 275

Chapter 3 - The Kill
Submitted: March 24, 2007 • Updated: March 24, 2007
Word count: 1313 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 264

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Falconlobo on March 24, 2007, 10:46:17 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
Falconlobohhmm long but interesting but still confusing a bit

Falconlobo on March 21, 2007, 8:20:59 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
Falconlobothe plot thickens what will happen next tune in to finf out

good stroy i don't fully understand it not knowing too mcuh aobut FF

Falconlobo on March 19, 2007, 1:59:41 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconloboit's better^^ not as many typos a few are okay

so i can understand it better than before thanks^^

Falconlobo on March 19, 2007, 1:19:17 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconloboum it's good

but it has a lot of spelling mistakes in the story and some words are spaced together maybe you can edit it where it says edit story/chapter^^

but still good^^