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Chapter 1 - Untitled

If the format's messed up, sorry but this is my first time uploading writing. Anyway, I used Edgar Allan Poe's style of writing for this so I hope you enjoy it!

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled




Deep in Hell's infernal core,

Vast travelers wander evermore,

No ghastly monarchs bare remorse,

For their kingdoms taken in unearthly force.



Their life a dim-remembered story,

Pale memories a fleeing quarry.

Lost in a sea of forgotten dreams.

An extravagant bird without its wings,

Dispersed into darkness never again to be seen.



Silent in their eternal prison,

Malevolent thoughts hidden deep within,

Trapped in a myriad of nameless graves,

All that entrap the assailed knaves.

Whose wrong-doings and faults cannot mend,

That brought the souls to such tragic end.

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ZeonicSkunk on December 10, 2005, 9:37:10 AM

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ZeonicSkunkVery nice, dose flow like one of his works.

Whatsername on November 11, 2005, 3:22:52 AM

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Whatsernamewow...spigin' awsome!

_Sanctuary_ on September 8, 2005, 3:32:01 AM

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_Sanctuary_This is really good! Very EAP!
My favourite part is:

Lost in a sea of forgotten dreams.
An extravagant bird without its wings,
Dispersed into darkness never again to be seen.
Silent in their eternal prison.

Cool poem!
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