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Chapter 4 - people

The thoughts of a feline.

Chapter 4 - people

Chapter 4 - people
I was sleeping on the sofa when her sister turned on the TV. I was confused because all the people on the screen where thin and where wearing skimpy fur! I though about why she was watch this and why she was saying she wanted to be like them. Kathryn always told me that I should be proud of the way I look, but her sister seemed to think that she was not pretty enough. It is confusing that these skimpy little humans are so popular. I mean if they were cats they would be the laughing stalk of the feline world! Then why do humans think they need to be thin and skimpy? And why do they have so many problems? Kathryn does not have any problems like they do. It is stupid that her sister thinks she needs to be like them. If all people where thin and skimpy would the plump people be popular? I wish every one would look at what is on the inside and not the outside. Maybe that’s why I don’t see Kathryn with any boy’s. she never spends time with boys just other girls. I’m not saying she’s unattractive but her body does not fit her personally. Ah well humans will learn to love one each other for who they are soon enough. And when they do I want to be there, to see the day when love is forever. “A geode is an ugly rock! But when you break it open there is a world of beauty inside to be found!”~Tiger

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Jinx_in_Pink on September 28, 2005, 7:01:17 AM

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Jinx_in_PinkHmmm....it's a nice idea... people loving eachother uncondisionally, it's never gonna happen. But its a nice thought none the less. It was a good story and i'm putting it on my fav's list. If you could please checkout my stories.

Allison

blueshark4 on September 27, 2005, 6:47:49 AM

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blueshark4that was the point I was trying to make to the readers. when I said my body doesn't fit my personality I was try to refer to the thing at the bottom. just because your not thin or scantly dressed doesn't mean your unattractive. the story is in the perspective of my cat. my sister is the one watching TV wishing she was like them, not me. I'm perfectly happy with who I am. But thanks for saying some thing. it is nice to know what other people think about this subject^^ now I gotta go eat the rest of the b-day cake like a snake before my mom and dad get home^^

Gaz on September 27, 2005, 2:01:19 AM

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GazThis threw me off, Shark. In this short chapter, you expressed much dislike of your physical appearance. One statement caught me off, “I’m not saying she’s unattractive but her body does not fit her personally” How would you make yourself look if you could change things? Would you be skinny? Blond with size d- breasts? Would you wear a mini skirt that flaunts what you have? What would fit you personally? Beauty is only skin deep, this statement is oh so true. Many people do not believe this, especially coming from me. They are always like “What would you know? Your so skinny your probably an anorexic.” This comment usually pisses me off. I eat what I want, and I am fine with the way I look. Beauty is not being skinny, or having straight shiny hair or big breasts. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder (s). To some beauty is having compassion for all living things, for others it is appearance. But today, in the modern world that we live in, beauty is self confidence. In today’s world you have to look out for yourself. People aren’t always there for you to tell you what to do and give you confidence. You have to find it for yourself and flaunt it. If you are confident, the world admires you. If you aren’t confident in yourself, the world will harshly beat you down. What you have to understand is that the hope of humans to love one another for who they are is a dying wish. Human kind is not like that. We are cold, judging and cruel.