When i wonder what life is like

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Hmmm....it's a nice idea... people loving eachother uncondisionally, it's never gonna happen. But its a nice thought none the less. It was a good story and i'm putting it on my fav's list. If you could please checkout my stories.

Allison

that was the point I was trying to make to the readers. when I said my body doesn't fit my personality I was try to refer to the thing at the bottom. just because your not thin or scantly dressed doesn't mean your unattractive. the story is in the perspective of my cat. my sister is the one watching TV wishing she was like them, not me. I'm perfectly happy with who I am. But thanks for saying some thing. it is nice to know what other people think about this subject^^ now I gotta go eat the rest of the b-day cake like a snake before my mom and dad get home^^

This threw me off, Shark. In this short chapter, you expressed much dislike of your physical appearance. One statement caught me off, “I’m not saying she’s unattractive but her body does not fit her personally” How would you make yourself look if you could change things? Would you be skinny? Blond with size d- breasts? Would you wear a mini skirt that flaunts what you have? What would fit you personally? Beauty is only skin deep, this statement is oh so true. Many people do not believe this, especially coming from me. They are always like “What would you know? Your so skinny your probably an anorexic.” This comment usually pisses me off. I eat what I want, and I am fine with the way I look. Beauty is not being skinny, or having straight shiny hair or big breasts. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder (s). To some beauty is having compassion for all living things, for others it is appearance. But today, in the modern world that we live in, beauty is self confidence. In today’s world you have to look out for yourself. People aren’t always there for you to tell you what to do and give you confidence. You have to find it for yourself and flaunt it. If you are confident, the world admires you. If you aren’t confident in yourself, the world will harshly beat you down. What you have to understand is that the hope of humans to love one another for who they are is a dying wish. Human kind is not like that. We are cold, judging and cruel.

Very nice consept. A lot of the words are mispelled, but other than that it seems to have a nice idea to it.