Vision
Submitted October 16, 2007 Updated October 23, 2007 Status Complete | Um..yea...this is just me babbling cuz my friend Vee-chan(Blackwolfmoon) asked me to submit something...be as critical as you want, i dont care.
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Chapter 1 - Vision
Submitted: October 16, 2007 • Updated: October 16, 2007
Word count: 143 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 254
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Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:38:43 AM
Invader_Mira on (Chapter: 1)
Wow...and thats scratch work? ^_^ Cant WAIT to read more. -scampers off-luckylace222 on October 29, 2007, 7:22:11 AM
luckylace222 on (Chapter: 1)
:O Wow!!! YOU WERE BORN TO BE A WRITER ALL RIGHT!xEmotional on October 20, 2007, 11:35:27 AM
xEmotional on (Chapter: 1)
Wow, it's full of feeling :] I like it .YumeXItachi on October 20, 2007, 6:17:56 AM
YumeXItachi on (Chapter: 1)
omg...this...this was so...wow....i can't really explain this emotion but it's just wow....
it's really good
YoriXYamiForever on October 17, 2007, 3:07:41 PM
YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
Yori: Wow..... Wow...... O_O Wow...... That was..... wow. That was amazing! What a view, I love the emotion! Keep writing!! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on October 16, 2007, 12:22:17 PM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: index)
Kel: ^^ Kel-chan likes. ^^ Kel-chan really likes. Thinks big bro should continue. ^^angelfox on October 16, 2007, 12:16:31 PM
angelfox on (Chapter: 1)
This is crazy good! ^_^ *hugs*sexxygirl93 on October 16, 2007, 11:23:34 AM
sexxygirl93 on (Chapter: 1)
thats crazy amazing i can totally see wat u mean and i completely agree with wat ur sayin...u should submit more =^-^= *xHUGGx*
bookworm369 on October 16, 2007, 11:25:55 AM
bookworm369 on (Chapter: 1)
wow thanks...i totally thought that suckedsexxygirl93 on October 16, 2007, 11:36:42 AM
sexxygirl93 on (Chapter: index)
not its really good i LOVE it!!!bookworm369 on October 16, 2007, 12:03:27 PM
bookworm369 on (Chapter: index)
aww well thanks!Blackwolfmoon on October 16, 2007, 11:18:59 AM
Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs* you arn't horrible J.T-kun, it awsome! it has lots of emotion to it and meaning.... =D you should submit more *bigger hug*bookworm369 on October 16, 2007, 11:19:45 AM
bookworm369 on (Chapter: 1)
really? well i guess i might then...thanks<3