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Revenge

Well this is just something that i had to do for English class, and i figured, what the heck, I'll put it on here. So i did. Its probably not too good though, its all manufactured emotion...tell me what you think anyway lol

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Revenge
Submitted: October 23, 2007 • Updated: October 23, 2007
Word count: 158 • Size: <1k • Comments: 9 • views: 229

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Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 6:48:45 AM

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Invader_MiraHow do you manage to convey every emotion I've ever felt EVER in words on a page?! Its like...you're inside me...MY HEAD I mean...not just me in general...that would be weird XD oops.

FAVS***

wolfmoon on November 6, 2007, 10:52:39 AM

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wolfmoonWow, I feel that way about alot of people at my school, I usually just feed them to that thing that lives in the lake in my neighborhood though........

YoriXYamiForever on October 30, 2007, 2:08:06 PM

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YoriXYamiForeverWow, talk about writing that jumps off the page. SO full of emotion! I love it!

uchihagirl on October 28, 2007, 1:08:42 PM

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uchihagirlO.O amazing

KelekiahGaladrian on October 24, 2007, 9:19:42 AM

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KelekiahGaladrianKel: *in complete shock* OH MY GOSH!! THAT'S AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

sexxygirl93 on October 23, 2007, 8:21:49 AM

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sexxygirl93o wow i luve the way u wrote this,,,so amazing

Blackwolfmoon on October 23, 2007, 8:05:46 AM

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Blackwolfmoonwow o.O'  that's good.. your poems r soo much better than mine ^^

xEmotional on October 23, 2007, 8:03:07 AM

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xEmotionalwow, that's full of feeling .
nicely done, as always ;]

bookworm369 on October 23, 2007, 8:04:56 AM

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bookworm369really? i just did it for  group poetry assignment...but thanks lol