Apart
Submitted November 11, 2007 Updated November 11, 2007 Status Complete | This was a while ago, we're still friends, don't worry. Please comment, and remember you can tell me whats wrong with it too. XP
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Chapter 1 - Apart
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 169 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 160
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bajachick on November 18, 2007, 8:28:24 AM
bajachick on (Chapter: 1)
WOW that was very moving.uchihagirl on November 14, 2007, 9:22:02 AM
uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
this is rlly gud, like all ur other workbut im just wondering do u suffer from chronic broken heart of something (not trying to be rude I swear)
Invader_Mira on November 13, 2007, 5:52:21 AM
Invader_Mira on (Chapter: 1)
wow. Story of my life?? Oy...Every word you write I sink deeper and deeper into this spinning pool of my own melted mind. Its rediculous what words can do to me...^_^ -hugs u- can wait to read the next oneFAVS*
KelekiahGaladrian on November 12, 2007, 6:04:24 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
*in shock* That's so sad!! BUT SO AMAZING AT THE SAME TIME!! I couldn't find anything wrong with it....YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 12:30:13 PM
YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
Awwww, very heartfelt. I'm glad you're still friends. ^^ Very great work as always, I love how vivid it is! And the mountain part was very kool. More poetry I say, more! ^_^YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 12:21:18 PM
YamiRevea on (Chapter: 1)
O_O WOW....Makes me wanna cry...I had an experience like that...SO BEAUTIFUL!! >.< *Faves*