Immune
Submitted January 3, 2008 Updated January 3, 2008 Status Complete | Its a poem...read it....comment....your done. See how easy that is?
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Chapter 1 - Immune
Submitted: January 3, 2008 • Updated: January 3, 2008
Word count: 136 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 211
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wolfmoon on March 19, 2008, 6:52:32 AM
wolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
T_T Depressing.hayly125 on January 10, 2008, 2:01:20 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 1)
T_T it so sad!!! but i like it! nice job!B on January 7, 2008, 7:23:47 AM
B on (Chapter: 1)
o_o That was awesomeBlackwolfmoon on January 5, 2008, 12:28:03 AM
Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: 1)
this one is really dark and has a lot of emotion too it J.T, and i'd never turn my back on you or leave youuchihagirl on January 4, 2008, 7:15:53 AM
uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
I totally agree with YoriXYamiForever on this one, and its absolutelly amazing, one of your best yet even though it is depressingmyartmaybebadbutatleastitry on January 4, 2008, 1:46:49 AM
myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on (Chapter: 1)
Awesome *appluads* Just awesome that's all I can say.YoriXYamiForever on January 3, 2008, 1:59:13 PM
YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
Oh my gosh. I have another of my absolute favorites of yours to add to the list. This is really well written, it's very painful and that makes it personal. The last three lines are just.... wow.... Really great job! I promise I'll never leave! And I'll freaking stab anyone who causes you pain! >_<KelekiahGaladrian on January 3, 2008, 9:04:26 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
I'd never turn my back on you JT-kun, nor would I leave you, unless you asked me to. I like it, it's depressing, but good anyway. Great job! ^^