Difficulties
Submitted February 11, 2008 Updated February 11, 2008 Status Complete | Well this one is, in my opinion, my worst one yet. But I felt bad for not putting anything up for a while. So bear with me, I'll have a better one up soon XP Please comment anyway XD
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Chapter 1 - Difficulties
Submitted: February 11, 2008 • Updated: February 11, 2008
Word count: 115 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 158
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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 3:00:10 PM
hinatagurl123 on (Chapter: 1)
u r too hard on urself this was a very awsome poemYoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:30:06 AM
YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 1)
*smacks you* This is NOT your worst one! ALL OF THEM ARE WONDERFUL! >_< And I really like your word choice in this one and the two lines "Why is it so hard to lend a helping hand?" and the two "Why is it so hard to believe in a fellow man?" I really liked it! ^^DeathNoteSurvivor on February 26, 2008, 7:30:57 AM
DeathNoteSurvivor on (Chapter: 1)
=( didnt have to smack me...XPYoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:32:30 AM
YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: index)
O_O S-SORRY! Acted without thinking! *hugs you* SORRY!DeathNoteSurvivor on February 26, 2008, 7:34:02 AM
DeathNoteSurvivor on (Chapter: index)
*hugs back* its fine^^YoriXYamiForever on February 26, 2008, 7:35:40 AM
YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: index)
*smiles* Yay! ^^Ghostwolf360 on February 13, 2008, 1:50:48 AM
Ghostwolf360 on (Chapter: 1)
Very good. I like the style you writ it inEntering after every few words
Much like myself
::Scratches head::
Heh...I'll stop pestering you though, I should get back to my picture too
::Huge sweatdrop::
You did a great job!
KelekiahGaladrian on February 12, 2008, 6:52:00 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
That's not that bad JT. It's really good and it's so true. Great job! I enjoyed it a lot! ^^