In My Mind
Submitted March 16, 2008 Updated March 16, 2008 Status Complete | This is a little different than my usual work^^'' I tried to capture an image I had in my mind....don't think I really pulled it off but yea...please comment^^
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Chapter 1 - In My Mind
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 2:56:18 PM
hinatagurl123 on (Chapter: 1)
wow very deepKelekiahGaladrian on March 17, 2008, 1:32:50 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 1)
That's really good JT, I think you captured an image, if not the image, very well. Great job!Blackwolfmoon on March 16, 2008, 12:13:52 PM
Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: index)
i love it J.T, the rhythm is good, and i like the rhymes, you did an awesome job describing the image too ^^ <3unknownangel on March 16, 2008, 11:49:43 AM
unknownangel on (Chapter: index)
thats really sweet JT...i like the image it has, very peaceful^^