In My Mind

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Submitted
March 16, 2008
Updated
March 16, 2008
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 168
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This is a little different than my usual work^^'' I tried to capture an image I had in my mind....don't think I really pulled it off but yea...please comment^^

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

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Chapter 1 - In My Mind
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
Word count: 168 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 211

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hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 2:56:18 PM

hinatagurl123 on March 26, 2008, 2:56:18 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow very deep

KelekiahGaladrian on March 17, 2008, 1:32:50 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on March 17, 2008, 1:32:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

That's really good JT, I think you captured an image, if not the image, very well. Great job!

Blackwolfmoon on March 16, 2008, 12:13:52 PM

Blackwolfmoon on March 16, 2008, 12:13:52 PM (Chapter: index)

i love it J.T, the rhythm is good, and i like the rhymes, you did an awesome job describing the image too ^^ <3

unknownangel on March 16, 2008, 11:49:43 AM

unknownangel on March 16, 2008, 11:49:43 AM (Chapter: index)

thats really sweet JT...i like the image it has, very peaceful^^