My Life

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My Life

Author
brent
brent

Submitted
January 9, 2006
Updated
December 1, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 7
Size: 1k
Words: 1,005
Comments: 40
Views: 906
Faves...: 5
Rating: 2

This is where i am going to add all of my random poems and stuff
P.S. Extreme hatred towards Preps. (gotta kill'em all)

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Category: Miscellaneous » Gothic/Romantic

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - preps
Submitted: January 9, 2006 • Updated: January 9, 2006
Word count: 88 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 96

Chapter 2 - part 2 of "preps"
Submitted: January 10, 2006 • Updated: January 10, 2006
Word count: 146 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 102

Chapter 3 - Dejected Me
Submitted: January 24, 2006 • Updated: January 24, 2006
Word count: 198 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 104

Chapter 4 - Love
Submitted: January 25, 2006 • Updated: January 25, 2006
Word count: 142 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 96

Chapter 5 - The Sunrise
Submitted: February 1, 2006 • Updated: February 1, 2006
Word count: 121 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 106

Chapter 6 - .....Save me....
Submitted: March 17, 2006 • Updated: March 17, 2006
Word count: 121 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 85

Chapter 7 - Another line in the board of life.
Submitted: April 7, 2006 • Updated: December 1, 2006
Word count: 189 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 110

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setsuna_marie_meioh on April 24, 2006, 12:24:22 AM

setsuna_marie_meioh on April 24, 2006, 12:24:22 AM (Chapter: 7)

Yay, another one! This one is just as awesome as the others! Great job!
~Steph~

Cara on April 21, 2006, 3:14:17 PM

Cara on April 21, 2006, 3:14:17 PM (Chapter: 7)

Sad but beautifully written. I like it awesome job. And don't worry no doughnut... this time. ;p

Cara on April 19, 2006, 2:52:55 PM

Cara on April 19, 2006, 2:52:55 PM (Chapter: 1)

I like it. Awesome job, +favs. Here have a doughnut. *shoves a doughnut down your throat*

brent on April 7, 2006, 1:57:44 PM

brent on April 7, 2006, 1:57:44 PM (Chapter: 7)

this is like......the legacy of the recycled paper or something....... im really tired.... you can tell cant u?

STOP FOLLOWING ME YOU DAMN VOICES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

setsuna_marie_meioh on March 23, 2006, 11:04:04 PM

setsuna_marie_meioh on March 23, 2006, 11:04:04 PM (Chapter: 6)

**Claps** Yay, I really like this one! I wrote a poem similar to this... but I think I lost it... **Sweatdrops** Anyway, great job!
~Steph~

Rocker_Kitsune on February 10, 2006, 9:10:43 AM

Rocker_Kitsune on February 10, 2006, 9:10:43 AM (Chapter: 2)

*grabs head* Too much rythming!!! MIGRANE!

setsuna_marie_meioh on February 6, 2006, 11:24:16 PM

setsuna_marie_meioh on February 6, 2006, 11:24:16 PM (Chapter: 5)

Wow, nicely done, as usual! ^_^

Ichidou_Daisuke on February 5, 2006, 7:05:19 AM

Ichidou_Daisuke on February 5, 2006, 7:05:19 AM (Chapter: 5)

Nice. ^^ Bravo. This is a really good poem. =P Well, in my lowly opinion.

brent on February 1, 2006, 9:05:31 PM

brent on February 1, 2006, 9:05:31 PM (Chapter: 3)

thx alot unfocused. seriously, i was joking about #2, because i already knew. XD Thx anyway

--Tyler Nelson

brent on February 1, 2006, 8:59:55 PM

brent on February 1, 2006, 8:59:55 PM (Chapter: 5)

*each line represents a year of my life. hope that helps.

unfocused on February 1, 2006, 12:42:26 PM

unfocused on February 1, 2006, 12:42:26 PM (Chapter: 3)

"you might think that I do meth

you think that I'm not all here" -nice start with the humor.

"I feel like my mind is torn

My friend gives me funny porn

Am I gay or am I straight

I'm not sure but I feel faint" -this part makes me crack up laughing.

and then you say "I think I'm fracked up in the head" thats the best, damn funny.

"I have contemplated suicide

I will need more cyanide" -hahahaha, damn, you know that one was good ;)

those were the funniest parts.

and you can find fallenangel on the forums XD

unfocused on February 1, 2006, 12:23:04 AM

unfocused on February 1, 2006, 12:23:04 AM (Chapter: 3)

haha, ya, it is a nice one, made me laugh at some good parts. I really like it. I also love the name. And the friend who gives me funny porn is the Administrator Fallenangel on the forums.

brent on January 29, 2006, 9:22:39 AM

brent on January 29, 2006, 9:22:39 AM (Chapter: 1)

lol i dont hate johnny depp, actually i like him. but i hate preps that like him. if that made any sense at all.

brent on January 29, 2006, 4:46:23 AM

brent on January 29, 2006, 4:46:23 AM (Chapter: 4)

thanks ichidou. like i said, this one was part of a dream i had.

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:49:38 PM

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:49:38 PM (Chapter: 4)

Hmm... best poem so far. Awesome job. ^^

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:48:02 PM

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:48:02 PM (Chapter: 3)

Nice poem. Personally, I like it better than your prep ones, no offense. >> Nice use of vocabulary, and I like your rhymes. A lot were pretty original.

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:39:45 PM

Ichidou_Daisuke on January 28, 2006, 4:39:45 PM (Chapter: 1)

Dude, Johnny Depp rawks frackin' hard. Don't see what you got against him... So yeah, call me a prep, if you will. I've been called "goth", "emo", "punk", and many other lables, so it won't hurt a bit. =)

By the way, this wasn't meant to be insulting (although I know I have a tendency to be harshly sarcastic), mmkay? I thought it was a pretty cute poem, all things considered.

brent on January 28, 2006, 5:10:20 AM

brent on January 28, 2006, 5:10:20 AM (Chapter: 3)

the feeling is mutual.
*kisses back*

brent on January 28, 2006, 5:06:01 AM

brent on January 28, 2006, 5:06:01 AM (Chapter: 4)

this is mainly from a dream i had a few weeks ago... i finally wrote it as a poem

punked_out_panda on January 28, 2006, 4:48:56 AM

punked_out_panda on January 28, 2006, 4:48:56 AM (Chapter: 4)

*sniff**sniff* Aww.. is someone in love!!! or more of an understatment? I love it... It really speaks out to me!!!

punked_out_panda on January 28, 2006, 4:46:13 AM

punked_out_panda on January 28, 2006, 4:46:13 AM (Chapter: 3)

Oh freakin god!!! I love it!!! Like thats pretty damn close to my life!!! the questions and all...And love..Ahhh the most troubling thing..The search of love....GOD I LOVE YOU!!! *kiss*

brent on January 25, 2006, 11:25:26 PM

brent on January 25, 2006, 11:25:26 PM (Chapter: 3)

yay, people are actually COMMENTING on my stories. (and not bad comments either, *cheer*) thx for the compliment, and yes, these stories are hard to write. It usually takes me a couple of hours to get (the poems) right.

--Tyler Nelson

brent on January 25, 2006, 11:22:26 PM

brent on January 25, 2006, 11:22:26 PM (Chapter: 4)

thank you for the comments, (littlegothofdisney) as for liking Johnny Depp, you know how preps are, same thing for My Chemical Romance. hmmmmm.....(idea!)(not)
thx anyways

--Tyler Nelson

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:13:34 PM

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:13:34 PM (Chapter: 4)

How heart-warming & touching...ur hell better than me :)

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:12:23 PM

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:12:23 PM (Chapter: 2)

I agree with the ppl above, i suck at writing gothic poems lol

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:10:24 PM

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:10:24 PM (Chapter: 1)

Lol, i like Johnny Depp, but i'm so not a prep! *thumbs up* ^^

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:08:32 PM

TheLittleGothofDisney on January 25, 2006, 10:08:32 PM (Chapter: 3)

Beautiful mate, that shot me deep like an arrow, & I suffer pain as well *faves

brent on January 25, 2006, 9:05:34 PM

brent on January 25, 2006, 9:05:34 PM (Chapter: 4)

thank you, set. they dont let you comment at school? (i can, i am doing it now). i am adding a story in a few, so look at it when you get on, ok?

--Tyler Nelson

setsuna_marie_meioh on January 25, 2006, 5:33:03 AM

setsuna_marie_meioh on January 25, 2006, 5:33:03 AM (Chapter: 4)

I liked! Sorry I didn't comment earlier, I was in school. I like! Keep it up!

brent on January 24, 2006, 10:58:19 PM

brent on January 24, 2006, 10:58:19 PM (Chapter: 3)

thank you set.

setsuna_marie_meioh on January 24, 2006, 10:43:21 PM

setsuna_marie_meioh on January 24, 2006, 10:43:21 PM (Chapter: 3)

Wow, that's deep. I like your writing style, I must say, very interesting. Keep me updated on your poem!

brent on January 22, 2006, 11:20:46 PM

brent on January 22, 2006, 11:20:46 PM (Chapter: 1)

thx gothgirl

Gothgirl13 on January 22, 2006, 11:00:00 AM

Gothgirl13 on January 22, 2006, 11:00:00 AM (Chapter: 2)

Wow this is even better than the first
u shound keep wrighting ur good and getting better

Gothgirl13 on January 22, 2006, 10:54:26 AM

Gothgirl13 on January 22, 2006, 10:54:26 AM (Chapter: 1)

this is pretty good i like it u shound wright more ^__^

brent on January 21, 2006, 4:20:24 PM

brent on January 21, 2006, 4:20:24 PM (Chapter: 2)

no doubt, this part is pretty much hate-filled. im going to bed now. (later)

brent on January 21, 2006, 1:08:11 PM

brent on January 21, 2006, 1:08:11 PM (Chapter: 2)

im 17. yes, im goth, ............"Shut the frack up to shootty little prep and mind your own damn business!!!" Right...Am i right?"

yes, you are right, btw one of my friends gave me a copy of her suicide note so i could scare them away.... it's quite funny actually.

--Tyler Nelson, 17

punked_out_panda on January 21, 2006, 10:35:56 AM

punked_out_panda on January 21, 2006, 10:35:56 AM (Chapter: 2)

My bad your goth...Awsome..so how old are you...you speak so strongly!!! age i wanna know your age!!!

punked_out_panda on January 21, 2006, 10:33:15 AM

punked_out_panda on January 21, 2006, 10:33:15 AM (Chapter: 2)

Aww... sad...Your a punk huh? the term Prep is use strongly meaning your not really a all people person right? I so understand...So out of that i got... In my words i'll warn......."Shut the frack up to shootty little prep and mind your own damn business!!!" Right...Am i right?

brent on January 15, 2006, 7:18:22 AM

brent on January 15, 2006, 7:18:22 AM (Chapter: 1)

thx so far for being the (only) person that has commented on either of my poems thus far.

lol btw you also have to read part 2, it is an extension or part 1, not a new poem

setsuna_marie_meioh on January 15, 2006, 5:59:43 AM

setsuna_marie_meioh on January 15, 2006, 5:59:43 AM (Chapter: 1)

Not bad, I'm not one for poems though, but I think it's pretty good. Don't get down on yourself because no one comments.

Setsuna: hey, Steph, you're a hypocrite, so shut up, you get down when no one comments you...

Go away, Set, I hate you now... Anyways, on a second thought, thank you again for your idea for Lost in the Mall. I'm going to get to work on that soon.

Setsuna: Yeah, like you were supposed to work on your Kingdom Hearts Bloopers..

Eeep!