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Love at first sight

A story about when a new intern comes around from teh sand village. Will gaara fall for her or will he ignore her completly. Tiny naruto+OC Gaara+OC

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - meeteing late at night
Submitted: September 2, 2006 • Updated: September 2, 2006
Word count: 206 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 244

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Falconlobo on November 10, 2006, 1:36:52 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 1)
Falconloboit's a good start

but you need to space more so the next chapters will be more readable to the readers

Love2talk11 on October 1, 2006, 10:51:01 PM

Love2talk11 on (Chapter: 1)
Love2talk11WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!PRETTY PLEASE??!!!!???!!!

Sasukesgirlfriend on September 18, 2006, 9:06:33 AM

Sasukesgirlfriend on (Chapter: 1)
SasukesgirlfriendOh...
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!

chiros_girl133 on September 29, 2006, 12:31:57 PM

chiros_girl133 on (Chapter: 1)
chiros_girl133I guess...I really don't like how it started out though...