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Chapter 1 - my love and my blood

The sad life of gaara...

Chapter 1 - my love and my blood

Chapter 1 - my love and my blood
This is my poem...i died and was brought back...my life is a wirlwind of hate...


"love me uncle..."




Why uncle, why?
Were you only satisfied if I were to die?
Hated by all, except for you,
Are you saying that wasn’t true?
You hated me, when I loved you.
My life a miserable one, no friends at all,
Would you have loved me if I weren’t so small?
I bet not.
What if I didn’t have this demon in me?
And didn’t take the life of your sister?
It wasn’t my fault!
That one lonely night, I sat teary-eyed,
That was the night when you terribly died.
You confessed your hatred,
I’ll never forgive you,
I want my hatred to you, to go to your grave with you!
I trusted you, you betrayed me,
Did my love mean nothing to you?
I thought it was father,
Who I hated as well,
Now I want both of you,
To go burn in hell!
Why was it only me?
Why not someone else?
To face all these problems,
That I’ve gone through and felt,
I thought we were friends,
But you know what I realize?
Friendships don’t always last,
Until the very end.
I'm all alone...

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matsuro on February 23, 2007, 12:08:58 PM

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matsurosad and beautiful. (an odd combo) I'm faving this

crazicat06 on January 4, 2007, 12:42:16 PM

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crazicat06*sniff* Poor Gaara-kun.... read the one I have up. It's about Gaara-kun too.

arijo on January 4, 2007, 10:01:34 AM

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arijo*crys* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thats the saddest poem ever*sobs*

edofangirl11 on November 22, 2006, 12:12:21 PM

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edofangirl11i really like it its very well wrighten

Falconlobo on November 10, 2006, 1:42:11 PM

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FalconloboIt's very well written and moving a very nice poem

but the spacing needs work
so for future stories and poems the spacing needs work

but otherwise your writing is really good

Hybrid_Sunshine on November 9, 2006, 10:23:01 AM

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Hybrid_SunshineWow... Beautiful... *sniffle* Great job and I'm happy I saw some Gaara eps that haven't been shown on Cartoon Network yet or else I wouldn't've understood this! ^_^

Love2talk11 on October 9, 2006, 10:39:05 AM

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Love2talk11sob story

Love2talk11 on October 1, 2006, 10:46:27 PM

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Love2talk11OMFG!!!That is the most depressing (and some what beautiful) poem I have ever read! 

Flare_Boy on September 30, 2006, 11:26:19 PM

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Flare_Boybeautiful

chiros_girl133 on October 1, 2006, 4:49:19 AM

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chiros_girl133Thank you...*sniffle* Gaara's life sucks...SOB STORY!!!*crys so much and drowns in own tears*