gaara's poem

Chapter 1 - my love and my blood
Submitted: September 30, 2006 • Updated: September 30, 2006
Word count: 209 • Size: 1k • Comments: 11 • views: 384

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matsuro on February 23, 2007, 12:08:58 PM

matsuro on February 23, 2007, 12:08:58 PM (Chapter: 1)

sad and beautiful. (an odd combo) I'm faving this

crazicat06 on January 4, 2007, 12:42:16 PM

crazicat06 on January 4, 2007, 12:42:16 PM (Chapter: 1)

*sniff* Poor Gaara-kun.... read the one I have up. It's about Gaara-kun too.

arijo on January 4, 2007, 10:01:34 AM

arijo on January 4, 2007, 10:01:34 AM (Chapter: 1)

*crys* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa thats the saddest poem ever*sobs*

edofangirl11 on November 22, 2006, 12:12:21 PM

edofangirl11 on November 22, 2006, 12:12:21 PM (Chapter: 1)

i really like it its very well wrighten

Falconlobo on November 10, 2006, 1:42:11 PM

Falconlobo on November 10, 2006, 1:42:11 PM (Chapter: 1)

It's very well written and moving a very nice poem

but the spacing needs work
so for future stories and poems the spacing needs work

but otherwise your writing is really good

Hybrid_Sunshine on November 9, 2006, 10:23:01 AM

Hybrid_Sunshine on November 9, 2006, 10:23:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow... Beautiful... *sniffle* Great job and I'm happy I saw some Gaara eps that haven't been shown on Cartoon Network yet or else I wouldn't've understood this! ^_^

Love2talk11 on October 9, 2006, 10:39:05 AM

Love2talk11 on October 9, 2006, 10:39:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

sob story

Love2talk11 on October 1, 2006, 10:46:27 PM

Love2talk11 on October 1, 2006, 10:46:27 PM (Chapter: 1)

OMFG!!!That is the most depressing (and some what beautiful) poem I have ever read! 

Gaaradragon on October 1, 2006, 3:00:14 PM

Gaaradragon on October 1, 2006, 3:00:14 PM (Chapter: index)

wow thats good so sad =,(,,,