a true story
Submitted August 3, 2004 Updated August 3, 2004 Status Incomplete | all the characters from sonic heroes are in this story.
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - here comes shadow
Submitted: August 3, 2004 • Updated: August 3, 2004
Word count: 119 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 173
Chapter 2 - the battle
Submitted: August 3, 2004 • Updated: August 3, 2004
Word count: 88 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 159
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DarkHieiGurl on August 5, 2004, 5:16:56 PM
DarkHieiGurl on (Chapter: 2)
Oh yea I have seen ur pics ^^. I think they're pretty kool. Would u like 2 see mine, cuz u can cum see them whenevr. Feel welcome 2 come by my profile. Plz continue the story.The_Chao_Lover on August 5, 2004, 5:49:25 AM
The_Chao_Lover on (Chapter: 1)
Coolio! Except you should put what each character says on a diffent line, for example: <br>Person one: Hello! <br>Person two: HiHi! cholly_the_chao on August 3, 2004, 5:47:19 PM
cholly_the_chao on (Chapter: 2)
yes, I will continue the story. cholly_the_chao on August 3, 2004, 5:25:08 PM
cholly_the_chao on (Chapter: 2)
oh,did you view my pictures to, DarkHieiGurl?DarkHieiGurl on August 3, 2004, 6:59:16 AM
DarkHieiGurl on (Chapter: 2)
Umm yea I think I get wut the story is about, but it's still a little confusing. And also, could u show a bit more story? I believe that the ppl talking in this story is overpowering all else. (u don't have 2 do wut I say here) and you could put quotations around sumthing a character is about 2 say 2 make it better. Plz continue the story! ^^