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cubit

something ive been working on. gotta work on it more. some of it sounds crappy.

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Chapter 1 - the story of pacnax
Submitted: February 29, 2004 • Updated: February 29, 2004
Word count: 736 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 188

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cmart009 on April 13, 2004, 10:06:01 AM

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cmart009ok those are great ideas. i kinda forgot about muh story today, so you can just copy this and paste and and repost it on yours with your ideas added. ok? ok!

dare2try on April 12, 2004, 3:12:06 PM

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dare2trywow theyr 2 loooooooong coments......@_@

dare2try on April 12, 2004, 3:11:36 PM

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dare2tryOK, hi, its me agen lol, jus had sum mor ideas. k so if all thats hapnd an now theyr bak in the present coz its bin ages, the present as in the time wen treena left. an then they cood meet sena. sena cood start off bein all snoby, but wen she sees how much cubit wants 2 stop all the fightin she starts 2 respect him, an they becom frends. then sum1 cood die, duno who but it always makes a good story line if one of the group dies. hey, i guess thats alredy hapend, i 4got bout norjen! lol anywho, so the three of them, cubit treena an sena cood all go an visit the king, treenas dad. he cood b like 'o my darlink treena, where hav u bin darlink' etc, an treena cood say she needs his help. he gets all woried an sez 'wots rong darlink, is my lil darlink in troubl?' an sez he'l do nethin 2 help her. she hugs him an sez shes not in trubl, she jus needs her mums stalf thing (coz her mum cood hav bin the queen of the mages or sumthin) an he no coz wen she died hes bin holdin on2 evrythin that was left of her, an he duznt want 2 get rid of it. an then he sez 'an i dont want 2 get rid of my darlink either, ur goin 2 stay here with me darlink, where u'l b safe' an he refuses 2 let her go anywhere. cubit an sena go on a mision where they hav 2 get past all the security guards an get 2 treenas room, coz only treena nos wher her dad keeps the staf. then they get ther an ther cood b a coupla twists an turns an then treena cood get the staf, an work her magic an the war is stopd, coz the staf has a power 2 make evrythin peacful, but only the queen mage's daughtr can weald it. the end TADA!!! i luv makin up storys!!!.....!!

dare2try on April 12, 2004, 2:54:38 PM

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dare2tryOo, iv jus had an idea u cood do in ur story! In the next bit, cubit cood agree 2 help treena, an seein as shes got nowhere 2 go coz shes cum from the futur, he cood ofr 2 let her stay wit him. an they cood fall in love. an then it cood turn out that norjen is a traitor, he was paid 2 stop treena from goin in2 the past, but he faild an now hes trapd. so he goes mad an tries 2 kil evry1. an then he cood fite cubit, an it looks likes cubit is gona lose, but then treena cums in an duz a funy magicy thing an sends him all her power/energy an he kils norjen. then...ok im out lol. u dont hav 2 use the ideas, jus suggestions, i no wot its like 2 not b abl 2 cum up with ideas. hope i helpd! ^_^

dare2try on April 12, 2004, 2:44:52 PM

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dare2tryi love cubit alredy! soon as i red the first few sentences i new lol!! GO CUBIT!!

cmart009 on March 7, 2004, 7:41:49 AM

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cmart009please comment! i need comments!