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a thing called death and life

i was bored in language today so i wrote this. comment. do not read if you have a weak concience.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - death
Submitted: March 22, 2004 • Updated: March 22, 2004
Word count: 94 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 191

Chapter 2 - life
Submitted: April 13, 2004 • Updated: April 13, 2004
Word count: 81 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 191

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demented_poet on February 7, 2005, 10:22:39 AM

demented_poet on (Chapter: 1)
demented_poetKool i cant right long stuff xD i can i just dont find the time to

WolfAquarius on September 10, 2004, 12:57:41 PM

WolfAquarius on (Chapter: 1)
WolfAquariustry this. (i just wanna see if it works) *ehem* get a pocket watch and swing it bak an forth while saying that poem and i think youll put somebody.... you probly dont need the poket watch. i got in a trance just by reading it. i luv it *adds to faves*

-W.A.

Dragon_Lord on August 12, 2004, 1:36:52 AM

Dragon_Lord on (Chapter: 1)
Dragon_Lordtake a look at my poems, u may get ideas. i dont care if its on the same subject or if u use some of them, in fact id be honored.

Darkly_Cute on July 17, 2004, 7:59:29 PM

Darkly_Cute on (Chapter: 2)
Darkly_Cutewow you're a really talented writer, Well done ^_^

dark_pikachu on May 24, 2004, 10:04:59 AM

dark_pikachu on (Chapter: 2)
dark_pikachuvery well written......

cmart009 on April 13, 2004, 10:07:55 AM

cmart009 on (Chapter: 1)
cmart009ive got to get some more ideas! well i need to think really deep like i did when i wrote this.

dare2try on April 12, 2004, 2:43:10 PM

dare2try on (Chapter: 1)
dare2trylol thats wel good! I can neva rite short stuf, i envy ppl who can rite short stuf, my thingys hav 2 go on 4 at least 5 frigin paragraphs! lol ok il get 2 th point, this is realy good u shood rite mor!

sweetblood on March 22, 2004, 11:20:05 AM

sweetblood on (Chapter: 1)
sweetbloodwow that's so great it's inspiring to find such great writers. It's almost hypnotic the way it sounds