The Dark Angel

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The Dark Angel

Author
darkangelblackdranzer

Submitted
March 24, 2006
Updated
March 24, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 9k
Words: 1,922
Comments: 9
Views: 1,567
Faves...: 2
Rating: 0

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Category: Anime/Manga » BeyBlade » Team Bladebreakers » Kai

Chapters

Chapter 1 - In the beginning
Submitted: March 24, 2006 • Updated: March 24, 2006
Word count: 1922 • Size: 9k • Comments: 9 • views: 394

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sola on March 30, 2006, 6:13:53 AM

sola on March 30, 2006, 6:13:53 AM (Chapter: 1)

I love this, it's great, love the whole idea of it

darkangelblackdranzer on March 27, 2006, 8:08:11 PM

darkangelblackdranzer on March 27, 2006, 8:08:11 PM (Chapter: 1)

HEY JUST TO STATE ESPESH TO POCKY_PIXIESTICKS_ANIME........KAI IS MINE ALL MINE AND NOBODY ELSES FOR ONCE IN MY LIFE I AM GOING TO BE GREEDY AND SAY KAI IS MMMMMMMMIIIIIIINNNNNNNEEEEEEE!!!! GOT IT *puts nose in air and then sticks tongue out* hehehe ^_^

Yorda_Valkov on March 26, 2006, 9:16:51 PM

Yorda_Valkov on March 26, 2006, 9:16:51 PM (Chapter: 1)

I forgot,*faves story*

Yorda_Valkov on March 26, 2006, 9:16:27 PM

Yorda_Valkov on March 26, 2006, 9:16:27 PM (Chapter: 1)

WoW!Cool!!!!
But Tala`s MINE!!!!!!!And my pic on his wall is biggest of all!!!MUWAHAHAHAAAA!!!!Take that Amaya,I got him first!!MUWHAHAHAAA!!!
Ooookay,now I AM being possesive.....Can`t wait for next chappie! ^_^
hey,imagine this:Ray sees Tazz and Kat going up to him..
Ray:Oh shoot,they`ll make me decide between them.....*gets really scared*--->*looks around in panic*--->*Tazz and Kat saw him*--->*grabs the nearest guy and kisses him*---->
Tazz&Kat:You moron,how could you!!!!!*they run away crying*
Ray:That was close
The guy he kissed who happens to be Bryan:Oh Ray!You finnaly revealed your love to me!!!@_@
Ray:Meeep*runs for it*
Okay long comment...Remember this Amaya,don`t ya?

shoujoneko on March 26, 2006, 3:43:27 PM

shoujoneko on March 26, 2006, 3:43:27 PM (Chapter: 1)

OMG!! HAHAHAHAHA!!!
That's so cool! Thanks for adding me in there darkangel!!
Lol, thanks! I can't wait to see what happens next!
I'm so devious... I'll outwit Tazz somehow... just wait Rei!!

raysbabygal on March 24, 2006, 4:39:29 AM

raysbabygal on March 24, 2006, 4:39:29 AM (Chapter: 1)

p.s THANKS ALOT FOR PUTTING ME IN THIS SOTRY! i think u did a great job not putting ray with either me or kat! this way we wont hate each other if one of us gets ray(even everyone knows rays mine! lol jokin kat!)

raysbabygal on March 24, 2006, 4:32:58 AM

raysbabygal on March 24, 2006, 4:32:58 AM (Chapter: 1)

OoO UR a wicked writer! i hope u write some more soon! its really good! YAY RAY!! XxmuahxX

Monkey-Ninja on March 23, 2006, 10:15:19 PM

Monkey-Ninja on March 23, 2006, 10:15:19 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow, cool chapter. Is Daichi gonna be in it. Hes part of the team too.

Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on March 23, 2006, 7:44:57 PM

Pocky_PixieSticks_Anime on March 23, 2006, 7:44:57 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow! that was long (sorry, i don't have much endurance for reading sometimes). it was really good. =^_^= *steals Kai* MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! =^_^= i can't wait to read more and find out what happens. =^_^= *gives pocky and pixie sticks* (yay! 1st comment) *1st comment celebration/dance*