One good date with Mina the mongoose!

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dynamite9

Submitted
July 18, 2003
Updated
July 18, 2003
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 114
Comments: 7
Views: 1,277
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Category: Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Minas Dait
Submitted: July 18, 2003 • Updated: July 18, 2003
Word count: 114 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 245

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Kodina on December 17, 2004, 10:58:08 AM

Kodina on December 17, 2004, 10:58:08 AM (Chapter: 1)

Um, even though this is CC and I will get flamed for it, you really need to use correct grammar, spelling and spacing of words and paragraphs. It helps to run your work through a spellcheck. I do it all the time. It makes your work seem much more polished.

Ja ne~!
~Kodina

Myrlkal on November 29, 2003, 10:47:37 PM

Myrlkal on November 29, 2003, 10:47:37 PM (Chapter: 1)

Ding ding, that is NOT Vaporotem's art. She says she's 7 and I believe her, so if she's seven, there's no way you know how to use photo shop. and if that really is your art, why don't you bring it to this website/ HUUUHHH????

Farplain on November 1, 2003, 2:48:17 AM

Farplain on November 1, 2003, 2:48:17 AM (Chapter: 1)

I laughed and I cried!

dynamite9 on October 24, 2003, 8:15:25 PM

dynamite9 on October 24, 2003, 8:15:25 PM (Chapter: 1)

huh?????

dynamite9 on September 21, 2003, 1:25:42 AM

dynamite9 on September 21, 2003, 1:25:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

9,AND ILL GO TO YOUR WEBSITE!:)

minamongoose on August 26, 2003, 12:17:49 AM

minamongoose on August 26, 2003, 12:17:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

what the? cool

dynamite9 on July 18, 2003, 3:02:21 PM

dynamite9 on July 18, 2003, 3:02:21 PM (Chapter: 1)

he he