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Chapter 0 - Prologue

This is about the Naruto group going to Middle School they are in 8th grade so friends,school,drama,fun,and middle school romance.Comment please!

Chapter 0 - Prologue

Chapter 0 - Prologue
Disclaimer:I dont own Naruto or any of the other characters.

Hinata's alarm radio went off singing Bring me to life By Evanesence at 6:00.

She got up thinking This is the first day of Konaha Academy for me and its in the middle of the school year too ,no one will want to be my friend and Neji is going there too so it wont be that bad he is very protective of me.Oh well time to face the music.

She went into the bathroom put on her head band so she wouldnt get any face wash in her hair then,washed her face with Biore. Hinata got her two towels and jumped into the shower (a 20 minute shower I might add). She went to the mirror and blew drie her hair,put on mosturizer and cover up and just a smige of clear strawberry lipgloss.

Hinata went into her ginormous closet with hardley much in it she really wasn't a girl to shop til she dropped but that was about to change very soon. She picked out a blue aero polo shirt and a jean skirt with legging and a pair of black flats. She didnt like to show off her body even though she is very beautiful.That would change also.

Hinata put her hair in a respectable bun with her bangs and two pieces of hair not in the bun,she was done getting ready.

She grabbed her purse with a book inside of course and went down stairs.

She sat at the kitchen table and ate cereal for breakfast,raisin bran.
When there foot steps coming into the kitchen who was it?

It was Neji coming down for his breakfast he grabbed a bowl,the raisin bran,milk ,and a spoon,he poured his cereal and sat down.

And now who comes running in but Hanabi grabbing a bowl of coco puffs set out for her.

Neji and Hinata finished their breakfast and headed out of the kitchen so they could grab their bookbags and purse.

Neji said "Well lets go out to the driver we have to be at school early so you can register." "Yes." said Hinata obeying her cousin.

They got into the black Rolls Royce with the Three Days Grace CD in.
to be continued......





Now: Now this is my first story so it isnt that good i just stared and once i got started ideas flew so I just got out a skool cuz 2day waz a 1/2 day :p so i decided to write and i came up with this idea lat night hence the title last nite thx 2 the peeps who gave me comments it gave me the will to acctuatley write the story so im gunna do the same thing with my prologue if no one likes it then i wont continue but if i get comments i will and remember this is my first story and i do like constuctive crisisum to make my story better and i do love suggesttions cuz well i have no clue where im going with this.

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kogalover2013 on December 16, 2007, 4:24:03 AM

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kogalover2013i luv this story plez write more

eelchic on December 16, 2007, 4:28:31 AM

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eelchicThx of course I shall write more the next chappie will b up by Tuesday I hopeing!!!!

Konohasdarkshadow on December 11, 2007, 11:41:00 AM

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KonohasdarkshadowNICE!!!!!!!!! THIS IS GONNA BE GREAT!!!!

eelchic on December 11, 2007, 8:28:04 PM

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eelchicThx i hope so! ^-^

alex772 on November 26, 2007, 9:23:04 AM

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alex772cool story keep writing you'll get the feel for it

eelchic on November 27, 2007, 5:01:40 AM

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eelchicaw thx im workin and i think im getting more ideas

sasukeXsakuraforever on November 25, 2007, 12:30:52 AM

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sasukeXsakuraforeverOMG Hinata sounds...GREAT! (if I said sexy, that would sound wrong! 0_o)
Awesome first chappie, I love it.

I'm not used to reading about Hinata as the main charecter, so it's a great way to learn! :3

Love your story, thanx for telling me, and keep me posted, I want to know when the next chappie is out!^^

eelchic on November 25, 2007, 5:56:49 AM

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eelchicill b sure 2 keep u posted thx 4 reading and shes my fav character so i just wanted to do something with her yah i waz gunna say in the chapp that she relly is hot but that would b so wrong>-< again thx ll def keep u posted workin on chap 1 now so out soon ^-^ <3

rffraff05 on November 23, 2007, 7:16:31 AM

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rffraff05sweet ness! Fa... wait for it ...ves!

eelchic on November 23, 2007, 7:40:07 AM

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eelchicThx ness im workin on my first chapp rite now!!!!! so b prepared!!! lol ^-^ <3

winxgirl21 on November 19, 2007, 5:14:20 AM

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winxgirl21I really like the story plot. the only thing i would like to suggest is maybe some more punctuation (commas maybe?) to break up the longer sentences so they don't run together as much. ^-^ It's very good so far, so keep it up!

eelchic on November 19, 2007, 6:03:37 AM

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eelchicok ill do that and thx 4 reading im workin on it when i get home 2marrow i get home early this week so prob a new chap every day this week

winxgirl21 on November 19, 2007, 6:11:51 AM

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winxgirl21ok, thanks for letting me know! ^-^ i'll be sure to check for the next chapter.

Blackwolfmoon on November 19, 2007, 4:58:57 AM

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Blackwolfmoonit sounds like it will be interesting

eelchic on November 19, 2007, 5:00:59 AM

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eelchicthx i hope so im workin on ideas

nextguardian on November 18, 2007, 11:11:39 AM

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nextguardianSounds like this'll be good, I'll go ahead and fave it so I can find it again

eelchic on November 19, 2007, 12:31:26 AM

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eelchicaw thx

GreyPichu on November 18, 2007, 7:53:01 AM

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GreyPichui can't wait for the chapters, it sounds really cool!

eelchic on November 18, 2007, 8:15:17 AM

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eelchicThx!!!! im worin on prologue now so if u hav any ideas...tell me <3 ^-^