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some poems i wrote

ok, here are wsome poems i wrote.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - poems
Submitted: July 21, 2007 • Updated: July 21, 2007
Word count: 304 • Size: 1k • Comments: 22 • views: 577

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taurus92 on July 21, 2007, 3:38:48 PM

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taurus92wow, those are really good ^^
full of emotion
and a good rhyming scheme =]

super_sonic2000 on July 21, 2007, 12:56:31 PM

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super_sonic2000wow. i write poems but nothing like these. you are truly gifted!

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:58:10 PM

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eriepilot44thankies!!!!!!

Ulrich101692 on July 21, 2007, 12:49:33 PM

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eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:54:23 PM

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eriepilot44thank you very much.

SharinganKakashi on July 21, 2007, 12:51:06 PM

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SharinganKakashithats amazing and 2 tell the truth im not a poem kinda guy awesome *favs*

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:54:11 PM

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eriepilot44YAY YOU LIKE EM!!!!!!!!!

neodusk on July 21, 2007, 12:46:54 PM

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neoduskTHESE POEMS ARE FILLED WITH SO MUCH EMOTION!!!

...AND IT ALL RHYMES!!! HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO THAT!?!?

Awesome writing! :P

SnowKitty on July 21, 2007, 12:36:31 PM

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SnowKittyThese poems are so sad, but they really are great! I can't help but think that these poems apply to your life. . . . . . . . Hm, oh well. It's probably not that big a deal. Once again, great poems!

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:37:15 PM

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eriepilot44the poems do apply to my life, kik, you got it head on!!!

FFXgirl on July 21, 2007, 12:27:33 PM

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FFXgirlWOW, they are wonderful!!! Sad but wonderful! My real life frined InuNaruFable2 writes great poems. Can you please check them out for her, she won't make more ir people don't read them. She also says they need critging(SP?)Anyways, I love them all! My fav is friends.

eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:28:59 PM

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eriepilot44tahnk you so much!