Fire

Submitted
November 24, 2005
Updated
November 24, 2005
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 125
Comments: 3
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This is this random poem i wrote about fire. its pretty kool. hope everyone likes.
please comment - i like to know if my stuff is good or not!!!!

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Chapter 1 - Fire
Submitted: November 24, 2005 • Updated: November 24, 2005
Word count: 125 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 189

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nedj77 on April 29, 2011, 2:24:03 AM

nedj77 on April 29, 2011, 2:24:03 AM (Chapter: 1)

truth, brillient, and yet a perfectly fit together.

on a scale of 1-10 i give it 1030

bluestar on April 3, 2006, 6:35:01 AM

bluestar on April 3, 2006, 6:35:01 AM (Chapter: 1)

this is fantastic! you are agreat writer keep it up!! very nice choice of words

Froze8 on December 2, 2005, 6:24:11 AM

Froze8 on December 2, 2005, 6:24:11 AM (Chapter: 1)

i like your poetry.
Froze8