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Bleeding sword

A story i have been working on for a few months... Ugh comment me okay?

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Chapter 1 - 1
Submitted: May 26, 2006 • Updated: May 26, 2006
Word count: 5543 • Size: 28k • Comments: 0 • views: 181

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yoshi123 on May 28, 2006, 8:49:46 AM

yoshi123 on (Chapter: index)
yoshi123Hey, that was a great story, the action, the characters, and the setting were all very interesting.I did feel that a couple of parts were a little to quick to happen, but it was pretty awesome.