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Chapter 1 - Invisable

I wrote this when i was angry, with my parents. hope you like it!

Chapter 1 - Invisable

Chapter 1 - Invisable
Girl

She wanders through life invisible,
To all the happy people,
Who mock her ,
And laugh.

The invisible puppet strings,
Made by her parents,
Push and pull her,
Into the darkness.

You may search for her,
But your happiness blinds you,
So you cannot see her,]
And you just pass her by.

After finishing this poem,
I realise,
The girl is,
Me

By feathered angel 29/4/2005

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ghost_guy on May 3, 2005, 2:33:49 AM

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ghost_guyI have been in this position as well. I understand it and have even scribbled poems alike it in my notes. It's sad that people come to feel this way and I admire you for posting it. Such a fragile subject, the gloom within one's self, but cheer up! All works out in the end.

Lanfear on May 2, 2005, 12:33:05 AM

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Lanfearwow, bril stuff, if you have time u can also check out my other poems ;)

animecheerleader on April 29, 2005, 11:36:38 PM

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animecheerleaderI love it. It one of the best poems on here I love it.