Girl
Submitted April 30, 2005 Updated May 3, 2005 Status Incomplete | I wrote this when i was angry, with my parents. hope you like it!
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Invisable
Submitted: April 30, 2005 • Updated: April 30, 2005
Word count: 66 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 434
Chapter 2 - Chains
Submitted: May 2, 2005 • Updated: May 2, 2005
Word count: 101 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 227
Chapter 3 - Failure
Submitted: May 2, 2005 • Updated: May 2, 2005
Word count: 113 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 214
Chapter 4 - almost the end
Submitted: May 3, 2005 • Updated: May 3, 2005
Word count: 118 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 205
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fallen_pixie on May 4, 2005, 2:09:48 AM
fallen_pixie on (Chapter: 2)
i love this! its brill and your others they just seem to display my life as well but then i always have someone to cheer me up when me like it ghost_guy on May 3, 2005, 2:35:52 AM
ghost_guy on (Chapter: 3)
Your entire poem which is in three parts are moving. I know the fealing as I said before. You can always talk to me about it too. *snuggles* Your way to express is beautiful and you should keep going with your poetry!ghost_guy on May 3, 2005, 2:33:49 AM
ghost_guy on (Chapter: 1)
I have been in this position as well. I understand it and have even scribbled poems alike it in my notes. It's sad that people come to feel this way and I admire you for posting it. Such a fragile subject, the gloom within one's self, but cheer up! All works out in the end. Lanfear on May 2, 2005, 12:35:48 AM
Lanfear on (Chapter: 2)
this is deep, excellent portrayal of emotion!Lanfear on May 2, 2005, 12:33:05 AM
Lanfear on (Chapter: 1)
wow, bril stuff, if you have time u can also check out my other poems ;)animecheerleader on April 29, 2005, 11:36:38 PM
animecheerleader on (Chapter: 1)
I love it. It one of the best poems on here I love it.