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Chapter 3 - Failure

I wrote this when i was angry, with my parents. hope you like it!

Chapter 3 - Failure

Chapter 3 - Failure
My body is now frozen in time,
Because there is nobody around to care,
No-one to help me,
No time to spare.


I have now given up all hope,
In finding a friend,
In finding my heart,
In finding my sole.


The chains are still there,
But this time there stronger,
And now are killing me,
With every breath I take.


My icy cage has turned to fire,
Not to resemble my heart,
But the anger,
In my sole.


My clothes have become rags,
My mouth is now dry,
My stomach is now empty,
My heart is now black.


By feathered angel 2/5/2005

P.S this isn’t true I am not dying!

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ghost_guy on May 3, 2005, 2:35:52 AM

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ghost_guyYour entire poem which is in three parts are moving. I know the fealing as I said before. You can always talk to me about it too. *snuggles* Your way to express is beautiful and you should keep going with your poetry!