sora's other side

Chapter 1 - sora' new friend
Submitted: June 17, 2007 • Updated: June 17, 2007
Word count: 277 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 429

Chapter 2 - sora's new self
Submitted: June 18, 2007 • Updated: June 18, 2007
Word count: 263 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 363

Chapter 3 - Kairi's horrible death
Submitted: June 18, 2007 • Updated: June 18, 2007
Word count: 161 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 395

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desertbreeze on June 18, 2007, 4:23:33 AM

desertbreeze on June 18, 2007, 4:23:33 AM (Chapter: 2)

Try spacing between character dialogue... Its kinda confusing right now, other than that its an Okay story

ffmaster11 on June 18, 2007, 1:21:14 PM

ffmaster11 on June 18, 2007, 1:21:14 PM (Chapter: 2)

thanks for the tip, it is my first story.

ffmaster11 on June 18, 2007, 1:18:28 PM

ffmaster11 on June 18, 2007, 1:18:28 PM (Chapter: 3)

i will add soon

ffmaster11 on June 18, 2007, 3:55:42 AM

ffmaster11 on June 18, 2007, 3:55:42 AM (Chapter: 2)

i will add soon