Chapter 3 - cold because of you
Submitted November 20, 2007 Updated February 20, 2008 Status Incomplete | welllll......YOU HAV TO READ IT!!! k?
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Chapter 3 - cold because of you
Chapter 3 - cold because of you
Cold because of you
Cold I lay on this lonely bed, the fear of dying the fear I dread. Ill die soon enough I know I will, soon enough Ill be laying still. From my head to my toes they will freeze, unless you can help me wont you please? But no, you wont you dont love me enough, I guess for you Im not enough. Im I not good, not good enough for you. That must be the case but I already knew.
You were with her werent you? Yes you were. You said you loved me! You swore you swore! But I guess if I died it wouldnt matter now. Because you dont love me, not ever no how.
Now I know why I am so cold, Im so cold because of you. I thought that had loved someone like you.
Cold I lay on this lonely bed, the fear of dying the fear I dread. Ill die soon enough I know I will, soon enough Ill be laying still. From my head to my toes they will freeze, unless you can help me wont you please? But no, you wont you dont love me enough, I guess for you Im not enough. Im I not good, not good enough for you. That must be the case but I already knew.
You were with her werent you? Yes you were. You said you loved me! You swore you swore! But I guess if I died it wouldnt matter now. Because you dont love me, not ever no how.
Now I know why I am so cold, Im so cold because of you. I thought that had loved someone like you.
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DeathNoteSurvivor on January 18, 2008, 9:38:48 AM
very well done, i love the titlehayly125 on January 21, 2008, 8:49:55 AM
hayly125 on
i love the title too!abcd123inuyasha on January 17, 2008, 9:28:30 AM
okay i have something to tell u but first answer me TRUTHFULLY is this about donovan or somthing? you can trust me i wont be angry if it is...hayly125 on January 17, 2008, 11:53:00 PM
hayly125 on
nope not really. it coulld be about danny thoughabcd123inuyasha on January 18, 2008, 7:28:54 AM
lol yeaaaaaa i can see that lolhayly125 on January 25, 2008, 12:30:12 AM
hayly125 on
yeah....stupid danny....