peoms that say how i feel, or they're just random
Submitted November 20, 2007 Updated February 20, 2008 Status Incomplete | welllll......YOU HAV TO READ IT!!! k?
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - through the memories
Submitted: November 20, 2007 • Updated: November 20, 2007
Word count: 63 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 256
Chapter 2 - all alone
Submitted: January 10, 2008 • Updated: January 18, 2008
Word count: 88 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 259
Chapter 3 - cold because of you
Submitted: January 17, 2008 • Updated: January 17, 2008
Word count: 153 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 229
Chapter 4 - the things you say and do
Submitted: January 17, 2008 • Updated: January 18, 2008
Word count: 146 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 493
Chapter 5 - Bubbles go pop!!
Submitted: January 29, 2008 • Updated: January 29, 2008
Word count: 40 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 203
Chapter 6 - A piece of my heart
Submitted: January 29, 2008 • Updated: January 29, 2008
Word count: 89 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 518
Chapter 7 - i wished i love you
Submitted: February 20, 2008 • Updated: February 20, 2008
Word count: 103 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 226
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abcd123inuyasha on January 29, 2008, 7:17:14 AM
abcd123inuyasha on (Chapter: 5)
what? its a tad different than the one you told me... the frack part wasnt in there... but you just had to put it on the internet...hayly125 on January 30, 2008, 12:17:27 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 5)
well thats the way i wrote it as well. sorry, bubbles were like the only thing on my mind when i was writing this!abcd123inuyasha on January 30, 2008, 5:16:05 AM
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nooo! i thought it was fire that was on ur mind when you wrote this!hayly125 on February 2, 2008, 6:48:09 AM
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yeah sure.....whateva!abcd123inuyasha on January 29, 2008, 7:18:12 AM
abcd123inuyasha on (Chapter: 6)
u talking about me and celeste? or the whole group? whatever, i like it no matter what ^-^hayly125 on January 30, 2008, 12:16:17 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 6)
remember that poem was about u and celeste silly!!! i read it to you guys over the phone, but its okay if ya dont remember as long as u like it!!abcd123inuyasha on February 2, 2008, 11:47:56 AM
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i probably wasnt paying much attention, and when did u reply to this? u use ur store computer again? or....hayly125 on March 4, 2008, 5:13:56 AM
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it might hav been at the store but it says am not pm...o wait it was in the mourning at school! i think....DeathNoteSurvivor on January 18, 2008, 9:38:30 AM
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great job, i think its awesomehayly125 on January 21, 2008, 8:51:51 AM
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thats great!! thanx soo much!!DeathNoteSurvivor on January 18, 2008, 9:39:10 AM
DeathNoteSurvivor on (Chapter: 4)
wow excellent job^^hayly125 on January 21, 2008, 8:50:46 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 4)
tankelie dankelies!!! im glad u like it!!DeathNoteSurvivor on January 18, 2008, 9:38:48 AM
DeathNoteSurvivor on (Chapter: 3)
very well done, i love the titlehayly125 on January 21, 2008, 8:49:55 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 3)
i love the title too!bookworm369 on November 21, 2007, 2:49:24 AM
bookworm369 on (Chapter: 1)
wow pretty powerful stuff, great jobhayly125 on November 27, 2007, 3:49:10 AM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 1)
thanx!! i hav aloot more but there on paperabcd123inuyasha on January 17, 2008, 9:29:51 AM
abcd123inuyasha on (Chapter: 4)
okay.... i cant really figure this one out... but good jobhayly125 on January 17, 2008, 11:57:14 PM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 4)
what do you mean? whats confusing you?abcd123inuyasha on January 18, 2008, 7:28:24 AM
abcd123inuyasha on (Chapter: 4)
no just the point to it lol nothing cunfuses me ^-^hayly125 on January 21, 2008, 8:48:30 AM
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ooo ok! i dont know what the piont is my self but its a cool peom!abcd123inuyasha on January 21, 2008, 10:19:29 AM
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holy crap when did u reply to this! ??? its the weekend!hayly125 on January 25, 2008, 12:30:57 AM
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yeah i know! ^-^ i was at my parents store when i wrote that reply!abcd123inuyasha on January 26, 2008, 10:15:07 AM
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oooo okay, that would make a whole lot more sensehayly125 on January 29, 2008, 12:04:41 AM
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yupabcd123inuyasha on January 29, 2008, 7:13:04 AM
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... so anywayz... yea... long reply there... ya... ... ... ... ..................hayly125 on February 2, 2008, 6:48:27 AM
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yupabcd123inuyasha on January 10, 2008, 12:49:15 PM
abcd123inuyasha on (Chapter: 2)
kewl i think ^-^ lol jking kewl beth nice jobhayly125 on January 17, 2008, 11:55:47 PM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 2)
thanx! ^-^hayly125 on January 10, 2008, 11:57:02 PM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 2)
tankles!abcd123inuyasha on January 17, 2008, 9:28:30 AM
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okay i have something to tell u but first answer me TRUTHFULLY is this about donovan or somthing? you can trust me i wont be angry if it is...hayly125 on January 17, 2008, 11:53:00 PM
hayly125 on (Chapter: 3)
nope not really. it coulld be about danny thoughabcd123inuyasha on January 18, 2008, 7:28:54 AM
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lol yeaaaaaa i can see that lolhayly125 on January 25, 2008, 12:30:12 AM
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yeah....stupid danny....abcd123inuyasha on November 20, 2007, 7:04:48 AM
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what? you make it sound like your in terrible pain? what the heck beth? where did this come from?hayly125 on November 27, 2007, 3:48:36 AM
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dunno... i just had the words in my head and wrote it thats all...abcd123inuyasha on November 28, 2007, 12:34:43 AM
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.... ur an idiot.... wtf? seriously, you make it sound like you have had a life of full hell... ur a weirdo...hayly125 on November 28, 2007, 12:35:53 AM
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sorry i made it sound like that and i am not an idiot but im a weirdo for sure!!abcd123inuyasha on November 28, 2007, 1:11:36 AM
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lol okay.. if you say so...hayly125 on November 28, 2007, 1:15:16 AM
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^-^abcd123inuyasha on December 3, 2007, 12:37:28 PM
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lol ^-^ cant wait to play our game again ^-^!!!!hayly125 on December 3, 2007, 11:53:04 PM
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yup!! its funner now with more peoples huh?