the forbiddin love of seperate clans

Chapter 1 - the morning of the soon to be destiny
Submitted: September 26, 2007 • Updated: September 26, 2007
Word count: 341 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 262

Chapter 2 - Destiny Arrives!and he Helps!!!
Submitted: October 21, 2007 • Updated: October 21, 2007
Word count: 439 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 227

Chapter 3 - an enemy among the boys
Submitted: November 17, 2007 • Updated: November 17, 2007
Word count: 377 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 222

Chapter 4 - Sasuke dead!or is he?
Submitted: December 3, 2007 • Updated: December 3, 2007
Word count: 153 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 213

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hinaXsasuke4eva on December 3, 2007, 8:49:59 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on December 3, 2007, 8:49:59 AM (Chapter: 4)

hey guyz...i messed up and only got this much on.

Kohakucrazy on November 23, 2007, 10:41:00 AM

Kohakucrazy on November 23, 2007, 10:41:00 AM (Chapter: 3)

WAAAAHHH!!! * Runs away crying* You're a meanie ya know that? But still..it was good..

GreyPichu on November 17, 2007, 9:34:32 AM

GreyPichu on November 17, 2007, 9:34:32 AM (Chapter: 3)

YEAH!!!!I love this story so much! and u made that idea sound totally awesome! it kills me and i gotta know what happens next!...I can't wait!^^

GreyPichu on November 17, 2007, 9:35:17 AM

GreyPichu on November 17, 2007, 9:35:17 AM (Chapter: 3)

if u need an idea, i'll be thinking for one.^^

hinaXsasuke4eva on November 18, 2007, 1:29:39 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on November 18, 2007, 1:29:39 AM (Chapter: index)

thx

hinaXsasuke4eva on November 17, 2007, 8:34:24 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on November 17, 2007, 8:34:24 AM (Chapter: 3)

speial thanks to GreyPichu ....please help me with the next 1....except for what happens at the very beginning

gaaralover1 on October 23, 2007, 10:30:19 AM

gaaralover1 on October 23, 2007, 10:30:19 AM (Chapter: 2)

Awesome story.... But why Sasuke Uzumaki? Why not just Sasuke? I dun get that..

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 28, 2007, 7:58:23 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 28, 2007, 7:58:23 AM (Chapter: 2)

i waz afraid negji would ask

GreyPichu on October 21, 2007, 9:38:16 PM

GreyPichu on October 21, 2007, 9:38:16 PM (Chapter: 2)

i love this story!so glad it was updated.i think i may have an idea so ill PM you.

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 22, 2007, 8:18:21 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 22, 2007, 8:18:21 AM (Chapter: 2)

yea...srry it took so long.i fractured my elbow,so i can't type as fast

GreyPichu on October 26, 2007, 2:07:54 PM

GreyPichu on October 26, 2007, 2:07:54 PM (Chapter: index)

u really dont have to apoligize for a medical injury.besides,it really didnt take too long for u to update.btw,does ur elbow feel better then it may have before?

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 28, 2007, 6:33:35 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 28, 2007, 6:33:35 AM (Chapter: index)

no...its really killing me!
my neice slammed a 2X4 on it

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 21, 2007, 3:06:33 PM

hinaXsasuke4eva on October 21, 2007, 3:06:33 PM (Chapter: 2)

HEY! I MISSPELLED SOMETHING AGAIN!
Later that day,after Sasuke got worn out from protecting her,hinmata said..
ITS REALLY...
Later that day,after Sasuke got worn out from protecting her,hinata said...

GreyPichu on September 27, 2007, 8:51:51 AM

GreyPichu on September 27, 2007, 8:51:51 AM (Chapter: 1)

awesome!cant wait for another chapter!

angelfox on September 22, 2007, 3:48:04 AM

angelfox on September 22, 2007, 3:48:04 AM (Chapter: index)

there isnt a chappy yet, but when there is, tell me! ^_^

hinaXsasuke4eva on September 26, 2007, 9:49:48 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on September 26, 2007, 9:49:48 AM (Chapter: index)

i finished chapter 1,but read mi comment to it

hinaXsasuke4eva on September 26, 2007, 9:47:35 AM

hinaXsasuke4eva on September 26, 2007, 9:47:35 AM (Chapter: 1)

HEY GUYZ!I KNOW THERE'S A MISPELL.
Sasuke anted to sleep, IS REALLY
Sasuke wanted to sleep.