~Coming~

Chapter 1 - the meeting
Submitted: April 5, 2006 • Updated: April 5, 2006
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Chapter 2 - Answers and rooms
Submitted: April 7, 2006 • Updated: April 7, 2006
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Chapter 3 - ~Meeting~
Submitted: April 21, 2006 • Updated: April 21, 2006
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Chapter 4 - I wonder May-ling
Submitted: April 29, 2006 • Updated: April 29, 2006
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Chapter 5 - the "dream guy"
Submitted: April 5, 2006 • Updated: April 5, 2006
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Chapter 6 - Watch out for trees and
Submitted: August 14, 2006 • Updated: August 14, 2006
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Chapter 7 - When are we going shopping?
Submitted: September 15, 2006 • Updated: September 15, 2006
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Chapter 8 - To the mall!
Submitted: October 17, 2006 • Updated: October 17, 2006
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Chapter 9 - Hitaka's Group
Submitted: October 18, 2006 • Updated: October 18, 2006
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Chapter 10 - Description!!! Buahahaha!
Submitted: October 27, 2006 • Updated: October 27, 2006
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Chapter 11 - Names, Ramen, and Nosebleeds
Submitted: November 4, 2006 • Updated: November 4, 2006
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Chapter 12 - First Day of School
Submitted: May 4, 2007 • Updated: May 4, 2007
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Chapter 13 - Revealed
Submitted: April 1, 2008 • Updated: April 1, 2008
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zerotimberwolf on September 4, 2007, 11:19:11 PM

zerotimberwolf on September 4, 2007, 11:19:11 PM (Chapter: 11)

go ahead and work on the others
this chapter will have me cracking up 4 weeks

zerotimberwolf on September 4, 2007, 7:41:54 AM

zerotimberwolf on September 4, 2007, 7:41:54 AM (Chapter: 12)

good story

and chapter 11 was the funnest fracking thing i ever read

Kittenrocks on January 6, 2007, 2:24:37 AM

Kittenrocks on January 6, 2007, 2:24:37 AM (Chapter: 11)

Coolness,love how the chapter ended

wolf74 on October 10, 2006, 5:37:15 AM

wolf74 on October 10, 2006, 5:37:15 AM (Chapter: index)

Its good! and thanks for commenting on my story, Shino's old Friend. I wrote another chapter, so even if it says there is still only one chapter, there's 2

hirataitokyo on October 10, 2006, 12:32:53 PM

hirataitokyo on October 10, 2006, 12:32:53 PM (Chapter: index)

Oh thank you so much!

Shadowkitsunedragon on August 19, 2006, 3:28:25 PM

Shadowkitsunedragon on August 19, 2006, 3:28:25 PM (Chapter: 6)

Hahaha, funny ^_^. Glad ya made more ^^.

hirataitokyo on August 20, 2006, 1:54:15 AM

hirataitokyo on August 20, 2006, 1:54:15 AM (Chapter: 6)

Yeah, me too... XD

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:41:56 PM

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:41:56 PM (Chapter: 5)

have to agree with shadow girl it's a great story and very unique :) plz make more

hirataitokyo on August 11, 2006, 1:54:26 PM

hirataitokyo on August 11, 2006, 1:54:26 PM (Chapter: 5)

thank you! Uchiha-Sasuke02! thanks for all of your comments!!! I will make more as soon as I can!

-simple tokyo

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:40:44 PM

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:40:44 PM (Chapter: 4)

i feel sorry for naruto ¬_¬' mistakin seth for a girl

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:39:40 PM

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:39:40 PM (Chapter: 3)

cool ;)

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:39:04 PM

Uchiha-Sasuke02 on August 10, 2006, 9:39:04 PM (Chapter: 2)

this is really good :)