Poems
Submitted October 11, 2008 Updated July 25, 2010 Status Incomplete | These are about my life Let me know if you like them
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - My Heart
Submitted: October 11, 2008 • Updated: June 20, 2010
Word count: 74 • Size: <1k • Comments: 15 • views: 645
Chapter 2 - Keri, Carry On
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: May 19, 2010
Word count: 342 • Size: 1k • Comments: 11 • views: 383
Chapter 3 - Friends Till The End
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: April 18, 2010
Word count: 158 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 389
Chapter 4 - Your Smile
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: April 18, 2010
Word count: 87 • Size: <1k • Comments: 9 • views: 384
Chapter 5 - Start Again
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: June 20, 2010
Word count: 158 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 389
Chapter 6 - KCK
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: April 18, 2010
Word count: 148 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 352
Chapter 7 - Sleepless Nights
Submitted: June 14, 2010 • Updated: June 14, 2010
Word count: 105 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 368
Chapter 8 - Growing Up
Submitted: June 14, 2010 • Updated: June 14, 2010
Word count: 86 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 355
Chapter 9 - Hello?
Submitted: June 14, 2010 • Updated: June 20, 2010
Word count: 114 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 364
Chapter 10 - Life
Submitted: July 12, 2010 • Updated: July 12, 2010
Word count: 154 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 314
Chapter 11 - Love?
Submitted: July 25, 2010 • Updated: July 25, 2010
Word count: 183 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 319
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_ren_tao_fan_ on November 23, 2010, 7:34:04 AM
_ren_tao_fan_ on (Chapter: 8)
_ren_tao_fan_ on November 23, 2010, 7:31:03 AM
_ren_tao_fan_ on (Chapter: 2)
I like this one. It's very personal and meaningful.Maybe one day it will come
Otherwise dont become
Ordinary like other people
Remember to be cheerful
Enough is enough let go on
That's my favorite verse.
lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:29:49 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 11)
very good love itlilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:28:41 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 10)
very goodlilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:27:33 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 9)
love this one very strong feelinglilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:26:18 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 8)
awwww love itlilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:25:21 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 7)
oooo that one really goodlilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:24:27 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 6)
very nicelilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:23:26 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 5)
love this onelilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:22:04 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 4)
nicelilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:21:29 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 3)
awwww i love itlilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:20:07 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 2)
love itlilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:17:44 AM
lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 1)
wow that is greatchichirifan92 on July 26, 2010, 5:06:56 AM
chichirifan92 on (Chapter: 2)
I like this poem because of the play-on-words with "Keri" and "carry." This reminds me of a poem i read last year by John Donne in which he uses play-on-words with his last name and his lover's last name (Moore)Very well done
ProjectINFINITY on July 25, 2010, 4:34:44 PM
ProjectINFINITY on (Chapter: 1)
I like it alotKyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 4:10:00 AM
KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 4)
whats with all the love poems? O.xKyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 4:04:19 AM
KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 3)
love poem....lol awesomeKyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 4:01:18 AM
KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 2)
sounds like me and my ex T^TKyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 3:59:16 AM
KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 1)
this ones pretty good :)DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:46:06 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 7)
all these poems are adorable! <3painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:16:53 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 9)
in the second to last section, in the second like you put mee when i think you meant my. i have a friend that cuts. some people cat or don't ant to be helped, and like you said some people just don't care.DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:41:58 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 9)
i second that! no one really doespainblack on June 20, 2010, 12:24:12 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 9)
hahah! come people cat!! ha! yes some people cat themselves. no sorry i meant cutDeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:25:21 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 8)
wow explains every aspect of things that have happened to me... well almost XDDeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:24:18 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 6)
awww <3 ^-^DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:23:35 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 5)
o_o i couldn't finish reading thisDeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:16:39 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 4)
awwwwwwww <3 that is SO adorable it makes me want to draw a picture using this poem may i? i will credit you and all :3DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:15:15 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 3)
BLECK LOVE >.< its an amazing poem but i cant stand these types of things IT BURNS x.x 5 *'s though out of 5DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:11:08 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 1)
oOOOOOOooooooH i love it! although when you put watching you put WAtching >.< it bothers meeeeeeee!!!iamkira on June 20, 2010, 2:12:38 PM
iamkira on (Chapter: 1)
All betterDeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:15:41 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 1)
YAY i have issues with these things XDDeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:12:35 PM
DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 2)
Wow this really touched my heart even though i hate these kinds of situations -cries-painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:14:28 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 8)
its life. its how we work. Nothing would be the same without it. its how we learn, and why we must learn. i really like your work... and your making me sound like an old woman.painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:12:34 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 7)
i like this one too. i like it a lot. have you ever tried to publish one of these?painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:11:20 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 6)
thats sweet.painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:10:18 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 5)
in the part about love the last word in the second line needs a d.painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:08:33 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 4)
yep... this is it... this is the one that many people (i say this because i can relate to this one the most... hehe) can relate to. your very good...painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:06:35 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 3)
... AWWWW!! LOVE-LOVE! i love it.... aw... thats so sweet. your by far the best poet i have ever seen.painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:05:00 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 2)
sometimes true love means letting the one you love go. this one was truly amazing.painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:01:49 PM
painblack on (Chapter: 1)
its deep. i like it. you asked me to review it so i will. in the second line you should make the l an l. i really like this one.ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:38:48 PM
ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 4)
Wow! This poem speaks my thoughts! (about one person in particular anyways...)ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:30:57 PM
ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 3)
Awww! I love this one~ <3ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:25:14 PM
ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 2)
Awww! Reading this made me smile, but it also made me wanna cry.ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:17:26 PM
ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 1)
Wow... Thats depressing... XDLuluxKei101 on June 16, 2010, 8:48:12 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 9)
Very good, as to be expected by one of the best poets in the world :)iamkira on June 18, 2010, 5:30:00 AM
iamkira on (Chapter: 9)
Awh thanks but this is actually one of the 3 i submitted that night..and im not that greataxle on June 14, 2010, 3:56:05 PM
axle on (Chapter: index)
Hmm ... yur poems r touching ... keep up the great workTailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:19:17 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 5)
Oh my, starts from depression, to hope, and at the end, a slight amount of happiness. You are one hell of a talented kid. :)iamkira on April 19, 2010, 12:23:47 PM
iamkira on (Chapter: 5)
Its not even finished yetTailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:28:15 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 5)
Fffffffiiiiiinnnnnniiiiiisssssshhhhhh :3iamkira on June 14, 2010, 4:11:08 PM
iamkira on (Chapter: index)
IM STUCKTailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:21:10 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 6)
Well, its all love, trust, hope, and happiness, the other kind of poems I enjoy. Write more! :)TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:17:11 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 4)
Love and hate poems, I love these the most. Very true and relates to many. I like this one alot.TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:15:38 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 3)
This one is cute. :3 Short and beautiful. <3TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:13:58 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 2)
Wow, I knew this was part of a song. But its really nice too. :)TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:03:53 PM
TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 1)
This one is deep, describes love, pain, and suffering. I like this alot man. Nice work.iamkira on April 18, 2010, 8:53:11 AM
iamkira on (Chapter: 2)
SUPRISE this is actually in the making of a songLuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:57:38 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 2)
It is?? XD Well good luck to you!! I write songs at times, but I have trouble with assigning the right chords to the lyrics o.o
LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:56:32 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 5)
Oh... my god. Again, this fits me as well. After a bad situation I was in, I met my current BF, and because of him I had a reason to live. I do go to church now and I'm trying to rebuild my life that someone had stolen away... Wow... This is... just incredible. * Faves.iamkira on April 18, 2010, 8:55:32 AM
iamkira on (Chapter: 4)
lolLuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:55:03 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 4)
...Minus this being written in the POV of a guy... this describes my feelings I've been having lately completely. o.oLuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:53:29 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 3)
I love this one too :D Again, I will say, YOU ARE VERY TALENTED.
:D
LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:52:39 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 2)
I like this one too... you should make these into songs... They're really good :)LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:51:27 AM
LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 1)
This is amazing!! I love it! I understand how it feels too... So that's a bonus! You have real talent! XDRavetheHedgehog on September 1, 2009, 1:20:18 PM
RavetheHedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
Wow, nice poem! The word flow is great! You should write more :]TearJerker on October 15, 2008, 7:22:08 AM
TearJerker on (Chapter: 1)
That was just too sweet. :)SomekindofFreak on October 15, 2008, 7:01:48 AM
SomekindofFreak on (Chapter: 1)
I really liked the repetition here. very emotional piece, here!BottleOfNandaTanda on October 14, 2008, 12:41:23 PM
BottleOfNandaTanda on (Chapter: 1)
Omg It's beautiful-cries a little bit- It's so sad D: But, I love how you write :]. -faves-
This is a well-done poem, I can feel the sadness behind it.