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These are about my life
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Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - My Heart
Submitted: October 11, 2008 • Updated: June 20, 2010
Word count: 74 • Size: <1k • Comments: 15 • views: 654

Chapter 2 - Keri, Carry On
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: May 19, 2010
Word count: 342 • Size: 1k • Comments: 11 • views: 387

Chapter 3 - Friends Till The End
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: April 18, 2010
Word count: 158 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 393

Chapter 4 - Your Smile
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: April 18, 2010
Word count: 87 • Size: <1k • Comments: 9 • views: 389

Chapter 5 - Start Again
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: June 20, 2010
Word count: 158 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 396

Chapter 6 - KCK
Submitted: April 18, 2010 • Updated: April 18, 2010
Word count: 148 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 357

Chapter 7 - Sleepless Nights
Submitted: June 14, 2010 • Updated: June 14, 2010
Word count: 105 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 372

Chapter 8 - Growing Up
Submitted: June 14, 2010 • Updated: June 14, 2010
Word count: 86 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 359

Chapter 9 - Hello?
Submitted: June 14, 2010 • Updated: June 20, 2010
Word count: 114 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 366

Chapter 10 - Life
Submitted: July 12, 2010 • Updated: July 12, 2010
Word count: 154 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 319

Chapter 11 - Love?
Submitted: July 25, 2010 • Updated: July 25, 2010
Word count: 183 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 322

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_ren_tao_fan_ on November 23, 2010, 7:34:04 AM

_ren_tao_fan_ on (Chapter: 8)
_ren_tao_fan_Ah... growing up. It really sucks, doesn't it?
This is a well-done poem, I can feel the sadness behind it.

_ren_tao_fan_ on November 23, 2010, 7:31:03 AM

_ren_tao_fan_ on (Chapter: 2)
_ren_tao_fan_I like this one. It's very personal and meaningful.

Maybe one day it will come
Otherwise dont become
Ordinary like other people
Remember to be cheerful
Enough is enough let go on

That's my favorite verse.

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:29:49 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 11)
lilbloodsuckervery good love it

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:28:41 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 10)
lilbloodsuckervery good

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:27:33 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 9)
lilbloodsuckerlove this one very strong feeling

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:26:18 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 8)
lilbloodsuckerawwww love it

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:25:21 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 7)
lilbloodsuckeroooo that one really good

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:24:27 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 6)
lilbloodsuckervery nice

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:23:26 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 5)
lilbloodsuckerlove this one

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:22:04 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 4)
lilbloodsuckernice

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:21:29 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 3)
lilbloodsuckerawwww i love it

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:20:07 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 2)
lilbloodsuckerlove it

lilbloodsucker on July 26, 2010, 6:17:44 AM

lilbloodsucker on (Chapter: 1)
lilbloodsuckerwow that is great

chichirifan92 on July 26, 2010, 5:06:56 AM

chichirifan92 on (Chapter: 2)
chichirifan92I like this poem because of the play-on-words with "Keri" and "carry." This reminds me of a poem i read last year by John Donne in which he uses play-on-words with his last name and his lover's last name (Moore)

Very well done

ProjectINFINITY on July 25, 2010, 4:34:44 PM

ProjectINFINITY on (Chapter: 1)
ProjectINFINITYI like it alot

KyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 4:10:00 AM

KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 4)
KyiNekoYashawhats with all the love poems? O.x

KyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 4:04:19 AM

KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 3)
KyiNekoYashalove poem....lol awesome

KyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 4:01:18 AM

KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 2)
KyiNekoYashasounds like me and my ex T^T

KyiNekoYasha on June 21, 2010, 3:59:16 AM

KyiNekoYasha on (Chapter: 1)
KyiNekoYashathis ones pretty good :)

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:46:06 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 7)
DeathTheKid8all these poems are adorable! <3

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:16:53 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 9)
painblackin the second to last section, in the second like you put mee when i think you meant my. i have a friend that cuts. some people cat or don't ant to be helped, and like you said some people just don't care.

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:41:58 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 9)
DeathTheKid8i second that! no one really does

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:24:12 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 9)
painblackhahah! come people cat!! ha! yes some people cat themselves. no sorry i meant cut

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:25:21 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 8)
DeathTheKid8wow explains every aspect of things that have happened to me... well almost XD

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:24:18 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 6)
DeathTheKid8awww <3 ^-^

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:23:35 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 5)
DeathTheKid8o_o i couldn't finish reading this

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:16:39 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 4)
DeathTheKid8awwwwwwww <3 that is SO adorable it makes me want to draw a picture using this poem may i? i will credit you and all :3

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:15:15 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 3)
DeathTheKid8BLECK LOVE >.< its an amazing poem but i cant stand these types of things IT BURNS x.x 5 *'s though out of 5

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:11:08 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 1)
DeathTheKid8oOOOOOOooooooH i love it! although when you put watching you put WAtching >.< it bothers meeeeeeee!!!

iamkira on June 20, 2010, 2:12:38 PM

iamkira on (Chapter: 1)
iamkiraAll better

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:15:41 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 1)
DeathTheKid8YAY i have issues with these things XD

DeathTheKid8 on June 20, 2010, 2:12:35 PM

DeathTheKid8 on (Chapter: 2)
DeathTheKid8Wow this really touched my heart even though i hate these kinds of situations -cries-

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:14:28 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 8)
painblackits life. its how we work. Nothing would be the same without it. its how we learn, and why we must learn. i really like your work... and your making me sound like an old woman.

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:12:34 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 7)
painblacki like this one too. i like it a lot. have you ever tried to publish one of these?

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:11:20 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 6)
painblackthats sweet.

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:10:18 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 5)
painblackin the part about love the last word in the second line needs a d.

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:08:33 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 4)
painblackyep... this is it... this is the one that many people (i say this because i can relate to this one the most... hehe) can relate to. your very good...

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:06:35 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 3)
painblack... AWWWW!! LOVE-LOVE! i love it.... aw... thats so sweet. your by far the best poet i have ever seen.

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:05:00 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 2)
painblacksometimes true love means letting the one you love go. this one was truly amazing.

painblack on June 20, 2010, 12:01:49 PM

painblack on (Chapter: 1)
painblackits deep. i like it. you asked me to review it so i will. in the second line you should make the l an l. i really like this one.

ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:38:48 PM

ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 4)
ShiaLaB486Wow! This poem speaks my thoughts! (about one person in particular anyways...)

ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:30:57 PM

ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 3)
ShiaLaB486Awww! I love this one~ <3

ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:25:14 PM

ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 2)
ShiaLaB486Awww! Reading this made me smile, but it also made me wanna cry.

ShiaLaB486 on June 19, 2010, 3:17:26 PM

ShiaLaB486 on (Chapter: 1)
ShiaLaB486Wow... Thats depressing... XD

LuluxKei101 on June 16, 2010, 8:48:12 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 9)
LuluxKei101Very good, as to be expected by one of the best poets in the world :)

iamkira on June 18, 2010, 5:30:00 AM

iamkira on (Chapter: 9)
iamkiraAwh thanks but this is actually one of the 3 i submitted that night..and im not that great

axle on June 14, 2010, 3:56:05 PM

axle on (Chapter: index)
axleHmm ... yur poems r touching ... keep up the great work

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:19:17 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 5)
TailsLover80Oh my, starts from depression, to hope, and at the end, a slight amount of happiness. You are one hell of a talented kid. :)

iamkira on April 19, 2010, 12:23:47 PM

iamkira on (Chapter: 5)
iamkiraIts not even finished yet

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:28:15 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 5)
TailsLover80Fffffffiiiiiinnnnnniiiiiisssssshhhhhh :3

iamkira on June 14, 2010, 4:11:08 PM

iamkira on (Chapter: index)
iamkiraIM STUCK

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:21:10 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 6)
TailsLover80Well, its all love, trust, hope, and happiness, the other kind of poems I enjoy. Write more! :)

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:17:11 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 4)
TailsLover80Love and hate poems, I love these the most. Very true and relates to many. I like this one alot.

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:15:38 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 3)
TailsLover80This one is cute. :3 Short and beautiful. <3

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:13:58 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 2)
TailsLover80Wow, I knew this was part of a song. But its really nice too. :)

TailsLover80 on April 19, 2010, 12:03:53 PM

TailsLover80 on (Chapter: 1)
TailsLover80This one is deep, describes love, pain, and suffering. I like this alot man. Nice work.

iamkira on April 18, 2010, 8:53:11 AM

iamkira on (Chapter: 2)
iamkiraSUPRISE this is actually in the making of a song

LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:57:38 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 2)
LuluxKei101It is?? XD
Well good luck to you!! I write songs at times, but I have trouble with assigning the right chords to the lyrics o.o

LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:56:32 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 5)
LuluxKei101Oh... my god. Again, this fits me as well. After a bad situation I was in, I met my current BF, and because of him I had a reason to live. I do go to church now and I'm trying to rebuild my life that someone had stolen away... Wow... This is... just incredible. * Faves.

iamkira on April 18, 2010, 8:55:32 AM

iamkira on (Chapter: 4)
iamkiralol

LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:55:03 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 4)
LuluxKei101...Minus this being written in the POV of a guy... this describes my feelings I've been having lately completely. o.o

LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:53:29 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 3)
LuluxKei101I love this one too :D
Again, I will say, YOU ARE VERY TALENTED.
:D

LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:52:39 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 2)
LuluxKei101I like this one too... you should make these into songs... They're really good :)

LuluxKei101 on April 18, 2010, 8:51:27 AM

LuluxKei101 on (Chapter: 1)
LuluxKei101This is amazing!! I love it! I understand how it feels too... So that's a bonus! You have real talent! XD

RavetheHedgehog on September 1, 2009, 1:20:18 PM

RavetheHedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
RavetheHedgehogWow, nice poem! The word flow is great! You should write more :]

TearJerker on October 15, 2008, 7:22:08 AM

TearJerker on (Chapter: 1)
TearJerkerThat was just too sweet. :)

SomekindofFreak on October 15, 2008, 7:01:48 AM

SomekindofFreak on (Chapter: 1)
SomekindofFreakI really liked the repetition here. very emotional piece, here!

BottleOfNandaTanda on October 14, 2008, 12:41:23 PM

BottleOfNandaTanda on (Chapter: 1)
BottleOfNandaTandaOmg It's beautiful-cries a little bit- It's so sad D: But, I love how you write :]. -faves-