ETHER
Submitted October 1, 2008 Updated October 1, 2008 Status Complete | OK SO I WROTE THIS AND I WANT TO PUBLISH IT BOOK IM LOOKING FOR AN ARTIST THAT WORKS WELL IN PANELS WHO CAN BRING THE CHARACTERS TO LIFE
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Chapter 1 - COMMUNITY
Submitted: October 1, 2008 • Updated: October 1, 2008
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gamefox120 on October 2, 2008, 6:45:26 AM
gamefox120 on (Chapter: 1)
this isn't going to win the contest
now I can tell that you've thought this through,
however I guarantee that the subject of man vs alien has been done to the point of exhaustion.
people are just plain tired of reading stuff like this.
now you've got some interesting characters keep them and develop them but the plot and Antagonists have to go
we need to think of an Idea with some replay value.
something new that will make people say: "Hey that's Different ,lets try it."
anonther thing try getting this stuff grammatically correct
if we work on this story it can get polished.
oh yeah Loved the happy days bit!
PS
also could you make drawings of your characters with their BIOs attached?
I need a visual model.