Sad, Sorrow, Shy, Suffer, and the Sea

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kenchan
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Submitted
May 25, 2007
Updated
May 25, 2007
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 1k
Words: 245
Comments: 1
Views: 1,552
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a poem I thought of this while listening to Rose from TITANIC.

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Category: Miscellaneous » Surrealism

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Sad
Submitted: May 25, 2007 • Updated: May 25, 2007
Word count: 245 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 230

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FallenAngel0792 on May 31, 2007, 10:43:08 AM

FallenAngel0792 on May 31, 2007, 10:43:08 AM (Chapter: 1)

Nice, I like the line, "Betrayal and maybe a liking to revenge in tears of Anger." And the metaphore is quite creative; humanity to the sea. Very nice.