The End

Chapter 1 - The End
Submitted: November 14, 2007 • Updated: November 14, 2007
Word count: 129 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 392

Chapter 2 - I added more!!
Submitted: December 4, 2007 • Updated: December 4, 2007
Word count: 124 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 286

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Falconlobo on April 3, 2008, 12:32:20 AM

Falconlobo on April 3, 2008, 12:32:20 AM (Chapter: 2)

very deep but good

ATHMime on December 5, 2007, 10:40:38 AM

ATHMime on December 5, 2007, 10:40:38 AM (Chapter: 2)

horrific yet beautiful... well done... well done...

SilverSparklex on December 2, 2007, 12:03:04 AM

SilverSparklex on December 2, 2007, 12:03:04 AM (Chapter: 1)

Its an excellent example of poetry. Well done x

linkinparkfreak on November 19, 2007, 5:28:49 AM

linkinparkfreak on November 19, 2007, 5:28:49 AM (Chapter: index)

thanks ^-^

Flyinmonkey1010 on November 15, 2007, 7:04:49 AM

Flyinmonkey1010 on November 15, 2007, 7:04:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

This is awesome! And also quite sad.... Excellent work!

linkinparkfreak on November 14, 2007, 5:25:06 AM

linkinparkfreak on November 14, 2007, 5:25:06 AM (Chapter: 1)

For those who cannot understand my poor example of poetry,
it's basicly about a jewish child who lived during the holocst (Parden me for my spelling). They were taken from their family and the finaly fell from sickness and pain, they were shot to make sure that they were dead, and they died right before they were liberated...