"A Broken Heart"

Chapter 1 - "A Broken Heart"
Submitted: September 11, 2004 • Updated: September 11, 2004
Word count: 180 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 449

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Kaizer13 on December 21, 2005, 11:07:19 AM

Kaizer13 on December 21, 2005, 11:07:19 AM (Chapter: 1)

this is a really good poem that is sometimes true.

nice job *favs*

sofiadivine on September 21, 2005, 2:42:21 PM

sofiadivine on September 21, 2005, 2:42:21 PM (Chapter: 1)

Sad but true... Too many people are left with nothing but a broken heart after a hope at more than life. Yet after those falls how many people actually want to lend a hand and help you out. Great poem.

weewoo on January 9, 2005, 11:00:06 AM

weewoo on January 9, 2005, 11:00:06 AM (Chapter: 1)

that was cool. i could see the picture in my head as i read this. your going in my favs! ^^

shamanic_princess on November 29, 2004, 3:06:29 PM

shamanic_princess on November 29, 2004, 3:06:29 PM (Chapter: 1)

nice poem, but quite sad.

weird_klown on September 15, 2004, 8:36:49 AM

weird_klown on September 15, 2004, 8:36:49 AM (Chapter: 1)

so sad.....yet sometimes true....you did a great job! ^_~