one piece
Submitted July 13, 2006 Updated July 13, 2006 Status Incomplete | this is my first one piece story so be nice please
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Chapter 1 - the captive part one
Submitted: July 13, 2006 • Updated: July 13, 2006
Word count: 282 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 298
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sonicflames on July 13, 2006, 4:37:03 PM
sonicflames on (Chapter: 1)
it kinda dosen't make sense u should edit and check 4 errors next time c-ya
luffylover92 on July 13, 2006, 12:46:23 PM
luffylover92 on (Chapter: 1)