DragonballBNM

Chapter 1 - Part 1
Submitted: February 7, 2004 • Updated: February 7, 2004
Word count: 1112 • Size: 5k • Comments: 8 • views: 257

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legendaryshadowartist on May 3, 2006, 7:10:42 AM

legendaryshadowartist on May 3, 2006, 7:10:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

pretty good but come up with better names i mean zapzoid?

guardianofanime1115 on April 28, 2005, 12:57:59 AM

guardianofanime1115 on April 28, 2005, 12:57:59 AM (Chapter: 1)

hey not bad....

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 21, 2005, 4:48:05 AM

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 21, 2005, 4:48:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

oh and read my story if u get the chance and plz comment on it , see ya!

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 21, 2005, 4:47:29 AM

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 21, 2005, 4:47:29 AM (Chapter: 1)

wat a cool story, i cant wait 2 see more.

K93200 on November 26, 2004, 6:31:52 AM

K93200 on November 26, 2004, 6:31:52 AM (Chapter: 1)

dragonballz is cool, i like fighting too

SassyBotan8990 on June 29, 2004, 4:21:14 PM

SassyBotan8990 on June 29, 2004, 4:21:14 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow that is cool! i like it so far! i can't wait for the other parts!

BlackNinja on April 9, 2004, 4:10:37 AM

BlackNinja on April 9, 2004, 4:10:37 AM (Chapter: 1)

Yea this is good stuff keep going, I like to see what happens next

lionlover13 on March 8, 2004, 7:06:30 AM

lionlover13 on March 8, 2004, 7:06:30 AM (Chapter: 1)

PLease continue the story! PLEASE!