The dark end to the world
Submitted June 7, 2007 Updated June 7, 2007 Status Complete | Well this is ma story about three kids go into the portal and back in time to when King Henry 8th was on the throne and soon before they know it there in big trouble
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Chapter 0 - The begging of the end
Submitted: June 7, 2007 • Updated: June 7, 2007
Word count: 94 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 136
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power9x on June 7, 2007, 7:15:55 AM
power9x on (Chapter: index)
Cons: Too Fast, Needs More Detail
Diagnosis: Read a bit more fanfiction before you write the rest. May I suggest my own? Also, as a tip, don't talk in the broken stuff we all use on the internet in a story. No offense, but you need work.