The story of a maid

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Submitted
May 8, 2005
Updated
May 8, 2005
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 2k
Words: 603
Comments: 2
Views: 381
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Rating: 0

This story starts with a maid doing her daily job when a man, more of a boy came up to her and asked "Can I get a room here, nothing to much just something to I can get a goods nights sleep." This is her story of how she chose to do something that sh

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Romance

Chapters

Chapter 1 - how it all starts
Submitted: May 8, 2005 • Updated: May 8, 2005
Word count: 603 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 131

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synclaire232 on February 28, 2007, 4:27:06 AM

synclaire232 on February 28, 2007, 4:27:06 AM (Chapter: 1)

you should check for spelling errors too, it's kinda hard to understand sometimes but it's good.

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on August 9, 2005, 10:06:33 AM

MitsukaiOkeruOozora on August 9, 2005, 10:06:33 AM (Chapter: 1)

it's pretty good, but there are some grammar errors that make it hard to understand.