Loss

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Loss

Author
mystic_girl

Submitted
December 21, 2005
Updated
December 21, 2005
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 4k
Words: 861
Comments: 8
Views: 916
Faves...: 3
Rating: 0

A truly sad story.. It was an essay i wrote at school..

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Category: Miscellaneous

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: December 21, 2005 • Updated: December 21, 2005
Word count: 861 • Size: 4k • Comments: 8 • views: 222

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RandomGuy on October 18, 2007, 9:45:59 AM

RandomGuy on October 18, 2007, 9:45:59 AM (Chapter: 1)

Just wondering if you ever felt like this? Have you ever wanted to kill yourself over a parents mistake or the loss of lossing one? But Yeah i know this feeling except its diffrent for me. My mom may be here but it seemed like she died a long time ago. Hard and cold like just like the world made her. And she won't open up to any family. My house feels like a house of enemies because with our family lost confused and fighting thier isn't any love in this house. But i know i was off topic but i just wanted to know if u felt that way. because in my opinion you would prefer to have had ur mother through out anything no matter what she became because while i wish mine hadn't died inside to begin with, and she was still same caring mother she was at birth

blusand30 on February 10, 2007, 1:52:23 PM

blusand30 on February 10, 2007, 1:52:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow...sad...

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:18:00 AM

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:18:00 AM (Chapter: 1)

STILL CRYING!

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:14:42 AM

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:14:42 AM (Chapter: 1)

This is my final comment- I feel so many differant things. Love- so innocent yet powerful.

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:13:24 AM

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:13:24 AM (Chapter: 1)

I can not hel;p but fave it. I was overdoing it, I know. I'm just really senitive, and that touchs me in my heart.

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:12:07 AM

Destiny_Queen on April 17, 2006, 4:12:07 AM (Chapter: 1)

I am crying!!!!! *SNIFF* That is so... I can't find words to describe it. Love- so innocent yet powerful. I am never going to even think of this again. I am so shocked- how can you bear to be the author of that?

(I know I'm being too dramatic, but still!)

SOPHIE_M_mangagirl on March 29, 2006, 7:00:18 PM

SOPHIE_M_mangagirl on March 29, 2006, 7:00:18 PM (Chapter: 1)

this story is breath-taking it filled me with differnet emotions hate-for the dad, sadness-for her and suddenly i found myself shouting dont do it. Its a lovely story, well you no coz of her missing her mum and stuff, i just want to kick the dad...HARD! favs!!!!!!!!!!
Sophie M*

Skyther on March 11, 2006, 2:37:38 PM

Skyther on March 11, 2006, 2:37:38 PM (Chapter: 1)

My heart is filled with saddened pain. This story is so breathtaking with words, I wasn't breathing all throughout it. Please write more storys like this, I will be waiting for another moment of sorrow to pass through my veins. I seriously cried. It reminds me of my own life, but this is far worse. You have talented writing skills, I love this. *Faves* I will cherish it forever.