Naruto: Jinsei nanakorobi, ya'oki
Submitted August 24, 2007 Updated July 8, 2008 Status Complete | Your favorite pack of lovable, hard-headed ninjas in a new adventure!
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - A New Start, and the First Loss
Submitted: August 24, 2007 • Updated: August 24, 2007
Word count: 2469 • Size: 13k • Comments: 10 • views: 269
Chapter 2 - Shinri! (Truth!)
Submitted: August 26, 2007 • Updated: August 26, 2007
Word count: 4041 • Size: 22k • Comments: 7 • views: 282
Chapter 3 - Awatidashii Tsuushin
Submitted: August 27, 2007 • Updated: August 27, 2007
Word count: 3131 • Size: 16k • Comments: 1 • views: 267
Chapter 4 - Now It's Personal: Dragon Ember Jutsu!
Submitted: August 28, 2007 • Updated: August 28, 2007
Word count: 2660 • Size: 14k • Comments: 1 • views: 257
Chapter 5 - Za suriru ichi nao satsu
Submitted: August 29, 2007 • Updated: August 29, 2007
Word count: 3031 • Size: 16k • Comments: 1 • views: 195
Chapter 6 - Sweet Victory: Who's Coming Out on Top?
Submitted: August 30, 2007 • Updated: August 30, 2007
Word count: 2537 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 199
Chapter 7 - Saying Goodbye
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
Word count: 3239 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 188
Chapter 8 - Poll
Submitted: September 3, 2007 • Updated: September 3, 2007
Word count: 196 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 157
Chapter 8 - Genjutsu: Night's only Friend!
Submitted: August 31, 2007 • Updated: August 31, 2007
Word count: 3166 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 242
Chapter 9 - It's all About Loyalty
Submitted: September 4, 2007 • Updated: September 4, 2007
Word count: 4210 • Size: 22k • Comments: 4 • views: 206
Chapter 10 - A First Time for Everything...
Submitted: September 5, 2007 • Updated: September 5, 2007
Word count: 2904 • Size: 15k • Comments: 2 • views: 191
Chapter 11 - Sakura's Dreams
Submitted: September 6, 2007 • Updated: September 6, 2007
Word count: 2270 • Size: 12k • Comments: 1 • views: 198
Chapter 12 - Behind the Dreams (And the Fan char personality quiz!)
Submitted: September 7, 2007 • Updated: September 7, 2007
Word count: 3274 • Size: 17k • Comments: 3 • views: 208
Chapter 12 - Updated Char Bios
Submitted: September 9, 2007 • Updated: September 10, 2007
Word count: 1344 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 191
Chapter 13 - The Blue Flame Chakra
Submitted: September 10, 2007 • Updated: September 10, 2007
Word count: 3842 • Size: 20k • Comments: 1 • views: 183
Chapter 14 - First Impressions
Submitted: September 11, 2007 • Updated: September 12, 2007
Word count: 2486 • Size: 13k • Comments: 2 • views: 195
Chapter 15 - Kabuto's Intentions
Submitted: September 12, 2007 • Updated: September 12, 2007
Word count: 3031 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 199
Chapter 16 - Disturbed, Destroyed, and Dumbfounded
Submitted: September 14, 2007 • Updated: September 30, 2007
Word count: 2925 • Size: 16k • Comments: 2 • views: 859
Chapter 17 - A Nice Surprise
Submitted: September 16, 2007 • Updated: September 16, 2007
Word count: 2897 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 167
Chapter 18 - All that Remains
Submitted: September 18, 2007 • Updated: September 18, 2007
Word count: 1605 • Size: 8k • Comments: 0 • views: 192
Chapter 19 - Return of the Transparent Hand Jutsu!
Submitted: September 20, 2007 • Updated: October 18, 2007
Word count: 2636 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 211
Chapter 20 - Searching for a Purpose
Submitted: September 21, 2007 • Updated: September 21, 2007
Word count: 2800 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 162
Chapter 21 - Death or Life: A Matter of Honor!
Submitted: September 22, 2007 • Updated: September 22, 2007
Word count: 2449 • Size: 13k • Comments: 0 • views: 211
Chapter 22 - A Lot to Consider: Chunin Exams on Deck!
Submitted: September 25, 2007 • Updated: September 25, 2007
Word count: 2300 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 159
Chapter 23 - Kabuto on the Run
Submitted: September 27, 2007 • Updated: September 27, 2007
Word count: 2192 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 171
Chapter 24 - Unstable Emotions
Submitted: September 30, 2007 • Updated: September 30, 2007
Word count: 1748 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 153
Chapter 25 - The First Team: Chunin Exam Mayhem!
Submitted: October 3, 2007 • Updated: October 4, 2007
Word count: 2808 • Size: 15k • Comments: 0 • views: 187
Chapter 26 - The Old Way of Life
Submitted: October 3, 2007 • Updated: October 3, 2007
Word count: 3022 • Size: 16k • Comments: 0 • views: 187
Chapter 27 - The Surgery
Submitted: October 4, 2007 • Updated: October 4, 2007
Word count: 3032 • Size: 16k • Comments: 1 • views: 188
Chapter 28 - Ekyt meets Itachi
Submitted: October 7, 2007 • Updated: October 7, 2007
Word count: 2916 • Size: 15k • Comments: 1 • views: 194
Chapter 29 - A Big Surprise
Submitted: October 8, 2007 • Updated: October 8, 2007
Word count: 2377 • Size: 13k • Comments: 2 • views: 188
Chapter 30 - Chunin Exams Resume
Submitted: October 14, 2007 • Updated: October 14, 2007
Word count: 2035 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 184
Chapter 31 - Kankuro's Mistake
Submitted: October 14, 2007 • Updated: October 14, 2007
Word count: 2106 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 278
Chapter 32 - Sakura vs. Sasuke
Submitted: October 24, 2007 • Updated: October 24, 2007
Word count: 2680 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 197
Chapter 33 - The Price You Pay
Submitted: October 28, 2007 • Updated: October 28, 2007
Word count: 1674 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 249
Chapter 34 - Something Had to Give
Submitted: October 30, 2007 • Updated: October 30, 2007
Word count: 2125 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 162
Chapter 35 - One Of Our Number Leaves
Submitted: October 31, 2007 • Updated: October 31, 2007
Word count: 2154 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 191
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Nekogal411 on September 25, 2007, 9:51:48 AM
^^ Sweet!SharinganKakashi on September 24, 2007, 12:54:22 PM
alright im caught up agian way to go cant wait for the next one lolNekogal411 on September 22, 2007, 12:55:55 PM
*still reading it* This...is....SO...FREAKIN AWESOME! ^^Neopetgirl on September 21, 2007, 4:17:25 PM
Whoo! Looks like Naruto has his eyes on Linda *giggles*This chapter was quite interesting! Ino is after Chakaro..*laughs* Now that's quite funny. I think the dialouge is fitting for most of the characters! Defintely in character which I simply adore about your fic.
And your ocs they're awesome additions. And you surely know how show each of these scenes in a descriptive outlook for the reader! Which I love,I just think you should describe a little more about how a certain character talks and how they sound or feel while they're doing so.
Maybe it's just me though,I'm not exactly best at advice.
Isn't many flaws with grammar and such that i've caught so far. I really like the plot and story as well so I defintely look forward to reading more when I can! :)
alchemest1 on September 19, 2007, 8:39:44 PM
Wow! Sweet battle! A great mix of jutsu's. Now I'm kinda sad that the team is breaking up but I have to say I saw it coming. Anyway. At least there wasn't any Seiza in this chapter. Lolalchemest1 on September 19, 2007, 7:56:34 PM
(groans at the thought) The Seiza!!! Don't remind me of that position from Hell! Lol. To many hours of kneeling like that (if you can call that kneeling) Why does that have to be their favorite position in ninjit su? Lol. Anyway. Great chapter. The fight was awesome! He is getting really good and I can't wait to see the next fight! I hope there is alot of Taijutsu in the next fight but I doubt it. I can relate to those matches! This is cool I love the story line it's like an on going episode. I'M DEF IMPRESSED!alchemest1 on September 19, 2007, 7:11:41 PM
Sweet chapter. Complicated but forward. Great job. Wow Ekyt is learning fast! His taijutsu is as good as mine. Lol. Now if only the others were real for meet to learn as fast as him. Lol. Wow. He is going to be unstopable bedford long!