Supportive Shoulders

wow, great story!!! it's awesome and you're right fanfictions do look like they are a lot of fun to write! now I'll have to try :D

I'm sorry I can't leave a good comment. I'm too "out of shape" with writing in general.

This is what a lack of social networking (a.k.a. "communication") with viably insane human beings will do to your brains. =_=

*fluid trickles out of ear*

Tora: *shoves some of Sasuke's ridiculously pretty hair into ear* T__T
Sasuke: *SCREAM* BALD! BALD! *runs around flailing*
Tora: Shut up, it'll grow back in a week.
Naruto: I would take that out of your ear. It might implant and transfer the souls.

See? See my predicament?! I'm ranting!

Congrats on the success, btw.
I just never could come up with a decent idea that wasn't incoherent. +_=

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I'm off to go attempt geometric circles.
Blame your little friend for this insignificant comment.

Wow that was a great story!! I really liked it!!! Love that you put soOOO much detail into the fight scense!! Awsome really well written. heHE Ryouko is funny and has "cute behavior" LOL ^^ lOVE the way you ended the story didnt leave me confused or anything, most of all left me wanting to read more to see what happens further on!!! WEEE
Its all FIVES FROM ME!!

Of course Orochimaru screws things up what would a date with Sakura be without some Crazy lunatic arriving on the scene

Awesome Story. That would be how their first date would turn out.