A Poem for my Sister
Submitted October 23, 2005 Updated October 23, 2005 Status Incomplete | My sister was emotionally abused by her husband. She moved away with him. Then she moved back (without him, they kinda seperated for 2 months). Then she decides that she wants to move back with him, so I wrote this to tell her how I felt.
Category:
Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Untitled
Submitted: October 23, 2005 • Updated: October 23, 2005
Word count: 154 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 160
Comments
You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment
Skye_Element on January 2, 2006, 11:18:52 AM
Skye_Element on (Chapter: 1)
I like it, it's deep and has good rhythm. so much for no talent! keep up the writing, you are great!supahfreak on December 11, 2005, 5:54:48 AM
supahfreak on (Chapter: 1)
whoa! deep poem! u spond like a prefessional!wow...dead_artist on October 23, 2005, 1:10:46 PM
dead_artist on (Chapter: 1)
yesh i do like poetry and this is cool. i sense strong emotion in it. it makes me slightly saddened..