The Circus
Submitted May 19, 2009 Updated May 23, 2009 Status Incomplete | A Circus in the dark woods filled with canabalistic members that are pure evil. (inspired by Dark woods cicus - vocaloid... its a song and alices adventures in wonderland) ratings may not be correct because story may change
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Introduction To The Dead Circus
Submitted: May 19, 2009 • Updated: May 19, 2009
Word count: 667 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 394
Chapter 2 - Chapter One
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
Word count: 672 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 171
Chapter 3 - Chapter Two
Submitted: May 20, 2009 • Updated: May 20, 2009
Word count: 575 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 172
Chapter 4 - Chapter Three
Submitted: May 22, 2009 • Updated: May 22, 2009
Word count: 889 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 176
Chapter 5 - Chapter Four
Submitted: May 22, 2009 • Updated: May 22, 2009
Word count: 739 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 175
Chapter 6 - Chapter 5
Submitted: May 23, 2009 • Updated: May 23, 2009
Word count: 899 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 189
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Yvette on May 24, 2009, 3:36:40 AM
It sounds really good so far, keep it up! I'd love to hear what happens next!orianajones on May 24, 2009, 7:53:02 AM
i wont be able to write properly till the weekend but will let you know (school gets in the way lol)KokoroTsuki24 on May 23, 2009, 1:37:30 PM
coolio! love it very much.KokoroTsuki24 on May 22, 2009, 3:45:15 PM
oh wow! i love this story! very intriguing. very good writing too. oh and when youre talking about skin complexion, its 'pale'. 'pail' is like a shovel and pail. just so you know.orianajones on May 23, 2009, 11:36:33 AM
lol yeah my friend pointed it out hehe. these are just the first drafts though. and thanksKokoroTsuki24 on May 23, 2009, 12:59:23 PM
... oh ok. ur welcome. and by first drafts... does that mean youre thinking about getting them published someday?! that would be SO cool! and when do u think ull have the new chapter up? i cant wait!
oh and when u do put it up, can u tell me on my profile or reply to this or something? cuz i have so many faved stories its hard to keep up with them all. ^.^
orianajones on May 23, 2009, 1:01:16 PM
lol maybe and i am in the process of writing it hahaKokoroTsuki24 on May 23, 2009, 1:05:03 PM
yay! is it gonna be long? sry cant help it. just wanna know. XDorianajones on May 23, 2009, 1:06:48 PM
lol idk hahaKokoroTsuki24 on May 22, 2009, 3:51:51 PM
ooh! very good! *faves* cant wai for the next chapter!