The Weary Traveler

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Submitted
October 18, 2007
Updated
October 18, 2007
Status
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 172
Comments: 3
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UM....this poetry that I wrote was based on this sadness that always been there,never ending its work on the Earth and I thought up of this song when it was raining like a year ago or something like that.

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Chapter 1 - The Weary Traveler
Submitted: October 18, 2007 • Updated: October 18, 2007
Word count: 172 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 138

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Shipo on June 27, 2008, 3:55:18 PM

Shipo on June 27, 2008, 3:55:18 PM (Chapter: 1)

wow...thats good.

GreyJedi on October 18, 2007, 8:44:38 AM

GreyJedi on October 18, 2007, 8:44:38 AM (Chapter: 1)

Very Good. :clap: Oops! Been spending too much time on DA lately and I'm too lazy to go fix that. -_-'
I don't really have much to critique on the poem, but I generally suck on the whole at critiquing things anyway...
Ooo, this reminds me, I've got more poems that I need to post...

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 6:19:38 AM

bookworm369 on October 18, 2007, 6:19:38 AM (Chapter: 1)

thats good!^^