Tears

Chapter 1 - Tears
Submitted: June 29, 2007 • Updated: June 29, 2007
Word count: 263 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 191

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matsuro on June 30, 2007, 2:03:18 PM

matsuro on June 30, 2007, 2:03:18 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is...wow. I've never heard such a great(and sad) poem before. I really like it! ~faves~

violet999 on June 30, 2007, 10:17:22 AM

violet999 on June 30, 2007, 10:17:22 AM (Chapter: 1)

I really like this poem, it is greatly worded and... I cant really explain. Its just a really well written poem. I'm faving this.

oceanfantasies on June 29, 2007, 10:51:28 PM

oceanfantasies on June 29, 2007, 10:51:28 PM (Chapter: 1)

Interesting, the tempos kind of change with some of the verses, but that doesn't take away from the great ideas in this poem.  Great work!

Falconlobo on June 29, 2007, 2:45:28 AM

Falconlobo on June 29, 2007, 2:45:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

nicely worded great poem

power9x on June 29, 2007, 2:47:39 AM

power9x on June 29, 2007, 2:47:39 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanks!

Falconlobo on June 29, 2007, 2:59:09 AM

Falconlobo on June 29, 2007, 2:59:09 AM (Chapter: index)

you're welcome