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life

this poem is about how life is today

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Chapter 1 - life
Submitted: November 30, 2006 • Updated: November 30, 2006
Word count: 144 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 580

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james13 on May 6, 2008, 5:34:03 AM

james13 on (Chapter: 1)
james13damn bro..thsi is werry true..i wondered this myself for a long time now..why do wew live so hated lifes?

Spazz on November 1, 2007, 8:23:17 AM

Spazz on (Chapter: 1)
SpazzYou have no idea how true this is. Or maybe you do.

...

Probably so since you wrote it >.<

Very deep. Lovely lovely poem. At least it's not only me that sees life as she truly shines. Most candy-coat it.

-Spazz

alchemest1 on November 1, 2007, 4:54:12 AM

alchemest1 on (Chapter: 1)
alchemest1Deep and true my friend. You humans seem to need hatred to thrive. It's sad but true but such is life.

fullnarutoZ on January 29, 2007, 7:07:59 AM

fullnarutoZ on (Chapter: 1)
fullnarutoZummmmm............ since when are you emo? tht was like seriously......emo

SonicandCloud4eva on January 16, 2007, 10:45:41 AM

SonicandCloud4eva on (Chapter: 1)
SonicandCloud4evaaaaaaaaawwwwz thats sooo true man ^_^ i'll give u ur props*claps* *faves* ^__^ THAT WAS AWESOME I TRULY FELT IT ^__^ excellent writing ^__^ u r a true author