Fate

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Fate

Author
psioboy
psioboy

Submitted
December 13, 2007
Updated
December 13, 2007
Status
Complete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 105
Comments: 7
Views: 1,081
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Rating: 0

Fate of a girl...

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Category: Miscellaneous » Gothic/Romantic

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Fate
Submitted: December 13, 2007 • Updated: December 13, 2007
Word count: 105 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 179

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james13 on May 6, 2008, 5:36:20 AM

james13 on May 6, 2008, 5:36:20 AM (Chapter: 1)

ok bro...not to be rude...but i didnt understand a word offo that..what is that supposed to mean...i got this abblility to sense feelings in writings and poems..if i am not wromg you had a lot off feeling sin this one but i just cant understadn it

Zenshii on December 18, 2007, 8:32:19 AM

Zenshii on December 18, 2007, 8:32:19 AM (Chapter: 1)

omg very deep...it's very sad...but in a good way :) Very nice!

jeffhardy2345 on December 14, 2007, 11:27:56 AM

jeffhardy2345 on December 14, 2007, 11:27:56 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thats... Sad But good

alchemest1 on December 14, 2007, 9:42:48 AM

alchemest1 on December 14, 2007, 9:42:48 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow Mate. Deep. I feel it. Your really good at making us feel what you mean. I felt for her mate. Stellar work.

Ranson on December 13, 2007, 1:13:00 PM

Ranson on December 13, 2007, 1:13:00 PM (Chapter: 1)

Your poems make the reader feel what you are trying to say you are a really good poet. I guess you have to figure out her fate on your own, hu? ^_^